All Comments on 'Becca and Her Uncle'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
shouldn't happen again...

But tomorrow the journey of experience begins.

I can't wait for tomorrow.

Write on, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Continuity Error

Becca mentions "The furthest I had gone with boys from school was a blow job and some fingering and it was always all over for them in minutes" in the fourth paragraph, then says "I had never sucked a cock before" in the final scene. You need someone to proofread your stories for you.

I still gave it 4 stars.

eroticlittyeroticlittyover 11 years agoAuthor
omission....

* just add in ' I had never sucked such an impressive cock before'

makes it all good lol

Infin80Infin80over 11 years ago
May I have some more, please?!?

Wow! what a hot story! your skill at setting the scene and developing the characters is very evident! I was totally drawn into your story. Can't wait to read more by you!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I love it my girl did the same thing with her uncle hehe

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