by Dream_Operator
Cute? Not really sure you can describe zombie sex like that... but thats the vibe i got. Umm, grats?
Story was funny in a lot of parts, but the sarcasm sometimes came across as mean. Tone down the sarcasm about mom and boyfriend dying and it would have reminded me of Emma Stone's character in Easy A (snarky but likable).
When I stop laughing I may come back and give a more serious comment. That may be awhile though.
Okay... the title alone got me to read this... and the story wasn't a disappointment I found myself laughing as I read. Sure the premise was silly but wasn't that what you were going for? For a Halloween themed story, it was very cute. Good luck in the contest.
Super hot and super funny! And also very relatable when you mention the ex boyfriend. We all have plenty of jerks like those who we wish would get eaten too. -.- lol This is a sure contest winner! Great stuff! :)
From "flashmob zombies" to "Oh my God! Zombies!" was my favorite part. This was hysterical. I loved it!
I wish this were categorized in Humor; it's a hoot to read! And BTW, come to Austin and you can check out (or enter!) actual "Air Sex" championships.
In the back of my head a part of me was going, ewww, but the rest of me was killing myself laughing! Loved it!
This is just hilarious. I laughed so much throughout the story. Hope you win. :D
You judged the humour perfectly. Such a crazy idea! And yet the sex was still hot and it kinda got me going (does that make me weird?). Well done!
I laughed several times. Shallow girl survives the Zombie Apocalypse; OMG's her way through a barren wasteland! I love it.
Oh my god, that was hilarious. That was really silly, campy and self-aware and I loved it. Good job.
I laughed so hard my tears ran down my legs...funny ...this s a great write...love love love it!!!93DA
Does NAAZP stand for National Association of Advancement for Zombie Pussy? LOL!!!
Sorry Mate, I only scored you -2- last week and I would like to retract my vote. You are probably a great writer but I am not into Zombies and therefore not qualified to vote.
This is one of those rare classic stories. Too fucking cool! I loved it. Read after Lingerie Sister which I also enjoyed. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for a totally new look at zombies! Hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it.