All Comments on 'Give Me the Man Pt. 03'

Hoping that you decide to continue it at some point since there is so much still unexplored.

Sad to see this part hasn't received more comments so far,

it is a great story, I love it.

I had to laugh at the ending (because of the explanation, I shall keep that in mind).

At last its starting to get interesting, took a bang to do it though.

Actually, the bang felt like a distraction to me. Of course, that could just be because I'm the sort that likes love stories, but ... it was a bit sudden. It's not that I mind an adventure, but the transition was jarring.