All Comments on 'Shadow Girl'

but with a question are you the one that had the line about the lipstick on the plastic spoon, if so that was one of the most stunning evocative lines i've ever seen.

this poem could use some work

these lines very good

Every shadow is,

paper dolls dressing by the Moon.

I liked this - especially the way it flows and the rhythm. I think it could be stronger by reinforcing the metaphors/links within stanzas. Specifically:

2nd stanza: 'your outline' does not really seem to relate to noon winds, but if you used your breath, whispers or something like that - it would.

3rd stanza: shadow talks and plays, if changed to shadow flickers and plays then relates more to the bedtime lightning

Just suggestions - I do like it as is.

cast by flickering moonbeams, TK U MLJ LV NV

was mentioned on New Poems Recommendations in the poetry forum.

silently evocative and wholesome.