All Comments on 'Mei Meets a Monster'

Terrible writing.

Thanks. That's really constructive. Must feel good to post anonymous comments with no value. I have had plenty of feedback. Some good, some not so good but with valid points I have tried to address.Yours is the first that was just pointless.

Unrealistic, even for a fantasy story. No concept of how real women act, their anatomy or physics - nothing more than the clumsy fantasy of the inexperienced.

You have a delightful imagination, but you really need an editor for grammar and spelling. :)

And while I agree with previous commenters that Mei's behavior is unrealistic, I would defend you by saying that this is EROTICA. It doesn't have to make sense, it just has to be hot. :P

I agree that the writing was unrealistic and the grammar poor, but I really didn't care. Damn that was hot. And very imaginative. I'm eagerly going on to the next chapter.

Appreciate the feedback. Happy you enjoyed my first attempt at writing in any genre. Yes my grammar is appalling and I am working on improving this and the structure of the story. I hope to close it out in the next couple of months and if I write another story will try to find an editor to compensate for my short comings. Merry Christmas and good luck to you and yours.

Keep up the good work. It can only get better