All Comments on 'When Worlds Collide'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic story

Great length and well written. Kept me hooked the entire time. Never heard of a werewolf SEAL, so I guess I'll check it out. Nice write up on Miss Cullen. Let me know when she gets publishied. LOL.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well Done

Brilliant, I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it!

Now for chapter two ....and lookie here -- the Christmas contest is just around the corner (hint hint). :-P

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well written

Would like to read more very captive story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
LOVED IT

Nice,loved the homage to other LIT authors,good job

chris73170chris73170over 11 years ago
loved it

i want more

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 11 years ago
so nice of you

to put Jaz and MizT in the story, they are excellent authors! And apparently good party people too! Amazing story!

JazCullenJazCullenover 11 years ago
Fabulous ;)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, my friend. I'm so glad I didn't read it before it was posted up, made it so much fun :)

You pen an engaging tale and I love the use of such diverse creatures within the story. I found this light and very refreshing and love your style of writing.

Best of luck with the contest! Thanks for making me just a lil bit naughty ;) LMAO!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Simple enough, fucking grrreeettt

Please tell me MizT didn't hurt wolfie. Also, please, for the love of God...does Jaz and MizT look like that. Holy shit! If that was real life I would have had a misfire like Kevin when they walked by. Just a great fucking story. I'll be watching for more. 6stars.

mikothebabymikothebabyover 11 years ago
Please write another chapter

i certainly can not wait to see what happens to him in the forrest. 5 stars all the way. Hugs, Kate

Iread2relaxIread2relaxover 11 years ago
Bow to the Master

Jaz, Mokkelke, MizT----awesome. No words just WOW! Voted 5 stars. Speechless.

MizTMizTover 11 years ago
Sneak Peak

Having read this story a few times as you tweaked it I didn't want to rush to read it as soon as it posted because I wanted to see what others thought about it. They agree w/me, you rocked this story. Merging your two worlds was really a clever idea. I hope that you are able to continue the combo storyline to a certain degree but you already know that. I must say reading about myself is still strange, but good strange. Now the problem is getting Wolfie and I together in the real world....hehe-he. I hope Jaz and Mok are as happy with your pro-trail of them as I am with mine.

Again great job on bring your two worlds together

bowlerhatbowlerhatover 11 years ago
date

if they went to a halloween party the night before, should the last section not be on November the first?

MSBLING59MSBLING59over 11 years ago
READY SET GO!!!!!!!!

NEXT INSTALLMENT PLEASE. LOVED IT!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More

Personally, I have never seen such a better series, especially in erotic litature. I love how dead on accurate you are with the SEALs, it'd be nice to see some more of Kevin and SEAL Team Two, once again, terrific job.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Fabulous!

Not only do you write great stories, you include some of my favorite authors! What great fun!

DoctimeDoctimeabout 11 years ago
WHAT FUN

Those of us who are "addicted" to the non human category recognize the cream of the authors. You honored some of them. Jaz stands alone. I think you have joined the group. Thanks for your recent e mail. Doctime

OmniferisOmniferisabout 11 years ago
pretty sweet

is there going to be more of this story? love to see kevin become a hero of the new world

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
FUCK YEAH!!!!!

I really want to read more of this story thread, that was freaking aweome man!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
cool story!

I sure wouldn't mind being in Kevin's shoes, but I wouldn't be in them for very long. Swimming with Xena would be my idea of heaven, it so happens that I really dig mermaids, and a horny one would really make my day!

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 10 years ago
Great Halloween story!

I loved reading this. Better late then never. It was way cool to have characters from 2 different stories AND authors I know injected into the story. Kind of like when networks blend 2 different TV shows together for special episodes. Outstanding job, Shipmate!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
This is it?????

Why is this it??? Why tease us??? This is so cruel. I love Kevin, please add more to this story. Werewolf and mermaid?? Haha the best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

You're like my favorite author here better than jaz Cullen. Please dont let this be the end. I love the whole group of seals and now the elfs and other creatures please continue. You can't leave us hanging!!!!! What a tease. Haha keep up great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
6 stars !

<<<<<<<<<<<<<part 2, plzz.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A Great Story.

I would love to see you continue this great story. More on Kevin's visit to the forest world and his meeting with Queen Bolara. Does he go for a swim with Xena and gets seduced by the mermaid? Will Laura sense a change in him after visiting Queen Bolara's world? Will he tell Laura about the forest world and all the mythical creatures that live there? Will she believe him and want to see the world for herself? Will Susan or Chad get in touch with him? Wardmaster 91D70

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