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Erika's Toy

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/03/12

Spell Check

Nice femdom story. Really enjoyed it. Hope to read more of your stories along the same theme.

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by mel_pomene10/03/12

A nice beginning.

As Anonymous remarked, check your spellings. Other than a few minor errors this was a very good story - it's a shame you haven't enabled voting.

Welcome to Literotica as a write, nonetheless, and please bring us more of your excellent work. Thank you.

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by Anonymous10/03/12

Total

crap

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by Anonymous09/09/13

Noncon

Using the word mistress does not change that this was a drugged rape.
Reads like an adolescent boy's wet dream.

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by Anonymous08/17/14

My fantasy exactly

Incredible. Transfer story to tucson, retain the names as I am, in reality, Daniel and the young, gorgeous femme fatale I knew in 08-09 was named Erica. She had related to me her fondness for dominating older men, and I have fantasized this scenario over and over again ever since. I have run into her twice since then, both times in work related circumstances, and wish we'd meet again.

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by Anonymous08/23/16

Lovely

Really good
can't wait for more

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