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A WHO-DUN-IT
when and where and why. TK U MLJ LV NV
Bloodless
Relentlessly linear and impeccably logical. Heartless automatons fuck. I think you have written this story before, Bob.
A very good revenge story
I enjoyed reading how Carla and Bob worked together to get their revenge on their spouses.
I think Bob came out the winner, since his wife Heather is going out of her way to be a good wife towards Bob.
I would be hard to leave her after the kids were grown, if she was taking such good care of him.
Thanks for the read.
Much more acceptable
than mosty of the revenge stories I've read.
A great story
Thank-you again for another great story. I enjoyed it. Certainly worth 5 stars.
And yet
you have three kids out there that are yours and you will never see them. What is the joy of that?
The Postponed Divorce and the TOP SECRET!!!!!!
1. I read it earlier on SOL and I gave it high feedback on storiesonline.net. The next story where the husbands decides on a postponed divorce Cpete had a story "Family Guy", where the husband postponed the divorce. In this story we can not see the future of Bob's marriage, so we can not know he will carry on his vow about the divorce, when his less child will be 18 years old.
2. A very interesting revenge to smuggle bastards on the nest of the loverboy's family, but Carla and Bob MUST HIDE THE SECRET FROM EVERYBODY BUT FROM THE CARLA's CHILDREN ABOUT THE BIOLOGICAL FATHERHOOD MUST BE HID WITH TOP SECRET WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting question
If Carla and Bob live in that 6 USA states, where after 4 years younger NO DNA TEST PROOF children the exhusbands do not have to pay children support and Josh reads LW hub and SOL and Josh checks his child(ren) secretly with DNA test befor their 4 years old birthday.........................
The BETTER REVENGE
The better revenge 5 years later, If they lives in the other 44 USA states, Bob will divorce from Heather, because his less child will be 18 years old and Carla will divorce from Josh and they will live together, but they will not married, so Josh pais the children support to Bob and Carla. In case the true paternity mus be keep in top secret as well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bob can play the super step father role!!!!!!!!!
Dear JPB you should have written a longer epiloge, a much longer epiloge and a much better REVENGE STORY would have been!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just wanted to say...
that you have one brilliant sick imagination about love, marriage, and relationships, as much as it turns my stomach to read about the people in your stories and wonder how much of them are there in the real world as much as i enjoy the reading, thanks for sharing, please try from time to time to write about some decent people with logical reactions to the situation of adultery.
Different But Good****
Poor Josh!! you play you pay 18yr x 3. Thanks for sharing BOB!!
The sequel . . .
. . . is set up. When the last of the kids have gone Bob gets to have a conversation with Heather. I am sure JPB can turn the conversation into a great sequel.
Most excellent
Well done. A 5 and the only cuck is the original cheater.
Uhm. What about his kids?
He misses Carla. But not even a mention of missing his twin girls and his son? Ouch.
Duna has a pointli
The kids of Carla & Bob need to be protected in case of medical issues where heritage is important! Duna identifies that concern. The Information needs to be available, even if Carla were to die suddenly. But Josh needs to be kept out of the loop to the extent possible. This is why this is a terrible idea, no matter how good a revenge it makes in fiction! Once they are grown, or Carla and Josh divorce, it becomes great revenge (except for the impact on the kids!)
Nice work
The truth is that Josh will get all the pleasure of having three children and the problem. He is what I call a true cuckold in that he does not have the slightest idea what is going on... Bob has given away his seed to Carla and not gained any children just a little revenge. Now the problem with his wife should be solved since she was only using Josh to get her ready for the main event....
Tough To Call
I don't believe in revenge sex. That makes this a tough tale to like. Somewhere down the line it's going to come up that Josh is not the father. That's when the shit hits the fan. The hell with the cheaters. I just hope the kids live a good life.
Cute revenge story.
Worth at least 4.5 stars.
still stuck
Josh at least in most states is still on the hook for child support even if DNA shows that they are not biologically his.
He signed their birth certificates and has accepted them as his.
How to regain trust in Heather after a year long affair ?
So what if she spoils him, that is likely just guilt, and too little too late.
Very Common
A lot of men in particular hang in there until the youngest is out of the house. Then they move out and file for divorce. Whether cheating is involved or not, it tells you a lot about the wife.
Maybe he should look harder?
Or maybe he should just stick to the plan and divorce her when the time comes. He's got lots of time to plan and get his ducks in a row to send her away with nothing.
Nope...
Bail out. A lifetime of living with a cunt that you're not sure is cheating?
What happens when next time she gives you something that nothing cures?
to the anons
Please take some time this evening to wash the nicotine off your cow's back side.
Thanks!
Implausible!
But one of you're best!
Why stay with someone you don't trust?
I guess he's hacked it out this far so what's a couple more years, but he'd better be planning well to leave the bitch penniless. And didn't he have any curiosity about the children he fathered with Carla? Most men would I think. Can't believe he isn't checking up on them. And Heather is still cheating. He just hasn't been clever enough to catch her. The old cliche applies - once a cheater, always a cheater.
Dear annont this is a fictional story
you ask the dumbest questions,. It's not real dumbass. Gave it a 5
LONG RANGE PLANS
have a way of becoming disrupted. TK U MLJ LV NV
interesting
Interesting story, I like the idea of josh raising kids that are'nt his. I wish that heather had had a price to pay but still one of the more sane and not big cock or black obsessed stories.
No one raises my kids but me
You sacrifice your own children and any relationship you could have with them for revenge. How is revenge when Josh doesn't know about it? Your children move away and you are ok with that? They all should be neutered.
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