All Comments on 'Skyrim: The Throat of the World'

by JTCIII

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labigqlabigqover 11 years ago
more

I loved the game and now I love this series!:)

JTCIIIJTCIIIover 11 years agoAuthor
Re: more

Thanks! While I don't have any plans for a third entry in the series I'm glad you've liked these two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
pretty damn good

This needs to be a full blown series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Idear get!

For a third story, after defeating what's his name, the big bad black dragon, he is given a wish to grant in the great hall. He asks for his thane, and then maybe anal?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good story

At the rate these two are going Lydia will end up pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Most enjoyable

A very nice read

JTCIIIJTCIIIover 11 years agoAuthor
Re:

Thanks for all the feedback guys! Keep it up and I may end up writing a third chapter after all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story man!!!!

it would be really nice to see Lydia get pregnant by the dragonborn!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I agree!!!

it would be awesome to have Lydia get knocked up by her thane!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awwwwwwwsooooome

dude this story is so fuckinggood keep em comming!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent

Really great overall, and I can't thank you enough for including a titfuck orgasm. I would love to see more stories from you, both about Lydia and your other characters. Keep it up!

JTCIIIJTCIIIover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks for all the feedback, guys. Glad to know that there's some fans out there. I don't know if I'll pick things up with Lydia and her Thane again. I'm currently working on the third entry in my Jessica Rabbit series and my Marvel/DC crossover story. Hopefully there's some overlap in the ven diagrams of the fans of this story and those stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing.

This is one of the best stories I've read so far, Keep them coming your simply Amazing!

JTCIIIJTCIIIover 11 years agoAuthor
Re: Amazing.

Thanks man! Much appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

These are amazing stories, well written and great takes on a character from a great game. Keep them up, I look forward to your next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Keep this up...if u kno what I mean

Great stuff...make it a series...n the whirlwind sprint...nice one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Brilliant use of shouting

The whirlwind sprint was a delightful and intelligent idea. Perhaps the best I have ever seen in fan fiction, even in non-erotic ones

alanna027alanna027over 9 years ago
5 stars

Excellent! Your setting and characters fit flawlessly with the game -- I never forgot that I was in Skyrim, and I loved that. Your physical descriptions were wonderful, and I love that you didn't just use one name for each body part. And using Shouts to up their level of intercourse? Brilliant!!!! Now I just want a story from you where Lydia gets knocked up.

johnflashjohnflashalmost 9 years ago

Great story love the set up.

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