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by butters10/03/12

you made me go looking things up

and so your poem drove me to discoveries. thankyou!

this piece has meat to its bones and reminds me of greenmountaineer's writes - he, and you, introduce some of us to moments in history we were ignorant of. it is hard, and poignant, and poetry worth spending time considering.

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by tazz31710/03/12

SOMETIMES YOUR BUCKET GETS A HOLE IN IT

and its not good for holding wishes, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone10/05/12

re: form

you make your own, you do well at it, the one lines, noticed the progression
Balfour, not going there. 5ed

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by Tsotha01/17/14

Interesting subject

Your poem brings to life details from an event which I knew about, but that has happened so far away from me.

And all it was one person to deny him? Harsh.

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