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Definitely not the common Halloween story. I liked it
Short and packed a punch
This story had a very good feel to it. For a story of its size, it leaves you breathless with with dread. Fear runs deep.
Maybe there will be another chapter to this but, as it stands, good job done.
Loved the deep and dark menace seeping through the story and building up to a an embodied feeling of dread towards the end. Couldn't help but feel this story. Good job!
i would never venture into erotic horror on my own but thanks to the contest/thread i ended up here and Really enjoyed your story. your writing style is beautiful and i'm having a hard time shaking the feeling of dread even though your story was short. excellent work.
Thank you
Thank you so much for your comments, and for the votes, they mean to the world to me. In my mind I was thinking of those urban legends and spooky stories told around campfires hence the brevity. Thank you again.
~ellie
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