Let's hope you didn't get anything else from him instead.
Because it was written from the point of view of a woman, that makes me think it was written by a woman. I favor erotica by women, generally, because I can learn things from that other point of view.
It comes across as pretty submissive, with all the name calling. I LIKE the idea of a woman acting the slut, as a game. But, I don't like to think of women as sluts in reality. I don't want to involve myself in sex with someone somehow less than me. In this story he catches her masturbating, and treats her like a tramp. Sexy, but I didn't like him, didn't like him treating her that way. To each his/her own.
I sure did.
Great story. I had a good time editing it. Sounded like a lot of fun to me.
Left me breathless.
Just read your story, I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait to read more of your stories
I love the location and playing outdoors ... I felt right there with you, you told the story so well ... thanks!
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