by little_donna
I've just discovered your writing!
This is one of the hottest stories I've read for a long, long time.
I test the quality of my own stories by the number of times I get 'there' whilst writing. Had I been talented enough to have produced this exceptional piece of work, I would have had to stop every few minutes :)
Love that photo, too btw. Imagining you in the story added real colour to the tale.
Thanks so much,
Claire
I loved the story and, especially, the discovery of mutual interest in such a far-away place. You write very smoothly and provide plenty of time and content for pleasing consequences for your readers.
The foreign atmosphere, the ages and predilections of older women: in the full blossom of sensuality and the opportunistic illicit submission to a desire for breastfeeding ....a domain no one but a woman can adequately describe....this is the sweet source of a delightful fantasy
Oh, for more.....for more of this sweetness
Cearly you've never tasted beast milk. It's not tasteless, it's actually very sweet as it's mostly fat and carbohydrates.