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A Touch of Ink

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by Anonymous

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by hotlover6910/04/12

well its a change was going well till the started shagging

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by avidreadr10/04/12

I enjoyed reading this. Short, light and romantic. It was a sweet little literary snack.

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by feelinromantic10/04/12

just needs a little polish

Good plot basis, but the language is a little off in places and you could do with some extra description about what's going on in the characters heads. Grab yourself an editor and keep writing!

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by lonesomedove6610/05/12

I liked it

Short sweet and romantic, but it is a shame that Shane needed a prodding like that.

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by Anonymous12/03/14

More of this story please

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