All Comments on 'New Girl Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

more please but have olivia part of the harem too

tiffanymannerstiffanymannersover 11 years agoAuthor

that's all she wrote in this series!

pammycakes13pammycakes13over 11 years ago

please, write more about "Jess", and Brian, and Olivia then,.......i want some hot sex with Jess and Brian!!!

james_38671james_38671over 11 years ago
hot

i want a jess, and more of lthis story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wheres the middle

Could do with a middle. Explaining what happend in the two months since they left the bar, you have a great start and a good end now add the middle?

bluesky496bluesky496over 11 years ago

i want to be a jessica and i want to read more of the story please .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
New story

How about a revenge story for Olivia against Brian where she get Jess back

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
LOL

What do you mean where Olivia gets revenge? Tim was the one who got fucked over. Olivia should be made a slave as well, the careless bitch...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Shit continuation of part one

I'd of liked an ending with misss olivia be the mistress and brian as a good friend. This is a weird ending which aint any realistic.

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