All Comments on 'Witch's Curse: Bitch Becomes a Slut'

and her hair reverted from blond to black, wouldn't her tits have reverted to their normal size?

Might she not have noticed that?

"I looked down and my big tits were gone"

Maybe you should read the story a little closer before you post a stupid comment?

Wishes you could work your witchcraft on me I so would love to be a bimbo slut...

Silkstockinglover has created an ASTONISHING tale!!! GADZOOKS: I am in awe, agog, amazed at the artistry involved in this tale's telling. Bless me, as awestruck, I stay openmouthed in admiration for this awesome, arousing, amusing story that deserves far more points than the mere 5 I was able to give it. Thank you, Silkstockinglover!!!!!!

A really great story - congratulations on such a fine piece of work and all good wishes for the competition. Thank you!

I am always a sucker for a happy ending with a twist. And a fun curse.

Love this story! And you're absolutely right, it could easily have fit any of those categories... Which is probably why I loved it so damn much!! Fuck, yum! :)

I love this story! Keep writing :)

It is a good story but I didn't really get into it. In all your stories there is a seduction before the sex and there it's missing. I know it's the point but it bothered me.

great story loved it now back to the other story i hope catching mommy. and thanks for another wonderful story. it had my black cock so hard. i loved all of it.

Love your writing , and lusty imaginations. Makes me wanna go past the H.S. with a happy meal ....lol ..that was bad

Heather was too smug for my liking and I wish she got pounded, but everything else was fucking perfect.

I really enjoyed this story. It kept me coming back to read it. Will there be more? Maybe a series?

hehehe

I liked the twist and the happy ending ... I wonder what will happen to Amber when she tries to assert her dominance - maybe Heather could "spell" her

pla·gia·rism/ˈplājəˌrizəm/

Noun:

The practice of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own.

I enjoyed your story immensely, however, I thought something was a little "off" with the idea when I read a story by another author written on this site in 2008 that is very very similar to yours.

Since you're doing this for a contest I only felt it would be fair to make sure all the voters have an opportunity to read the 2008 story by ChrystalWynd and make their own decision before voting on a story without an original idea.

http://www.literotica.com/s/bimbos-and-cuffs

Rebuttal

Hi,

Since my integrity is being questioned...I must rebuttal.

First off if you are going to question my integrity leave your name. Second, I just read the story you say I plagiarized and am mortified by such an accusation. Yes, they both have curses...that is like saying ever incest mom-son story has incest. I have read that story and enjoyed it, but to say it is plagiarism is ludicrous.

That said, being that there are a trillion ways to write a story, I assume there are bound to be similarities in plot here and there and everywhere...

Truthfully, I thought this story was very original, compared to many of my works, and was complex as well. I have not went to check the other story, but was the curse similar, the characters, the plot...what made you make such a confirmed theory?

I don't usually get so spirited about criticism on my work (like it or hate it that is your prerogative)....but this really ticked me off.

Lastly, I hope all who read my story go and check this other one mentioned (it is a good story)...and if you agree with the anonymous accusation I will remove mine, but I think you will agree the stories are incredibly different...other than they both have a curse that turns a girl into a bimbo...

You handled that beautifully, well done!

I think it's funny that the anonymous commenter provided the definition of plagarism but apparently doesn't actually know what it means. Especially when it comes to literature, even if this author had blatantly ripped off someone else's idea, as long as they wrote a different story then it's still NOT plagarism. Nothing about this story was plagarized from the story the anonymous commenter referenced. There was a kind of similar idea... sort of...

But even if this author got the idea / inspiration for this story from the other story, that doesn't make it plagarism. That's not what plagarism is at ALL. Otherwise no one would be able to write ANYTHING ever.

I thought you did a great job, love the schaudenfreude and the fact that the main character was tricked into thinking she would remain like that. I also like that she learned a lesson through her experience and came out of it a better person and that you threw in a little dash of romance at the end. Good luck with the contest! This is one of my favorite entries so far.

Must be a good story if you can get the anonymous wack jobs into a tizzy. I gave you a five.

Ummm...you forgot to cite your source? You know, the reference book you took the phoenetic spelling and definition from? I believe the word for that is...ummm...PLAGIARISM?

Next time, look up douchebag. It will likely better serve you.

-JT

Wow, a fantastic story. And whoever said this was a copy is "like so full of it". Is that good bimbo talk. This one actually has a story that is fully developed and complete. The other one is simple and vapid of plot. Anyway, great going, hope you win the contest.

u blowed my mind the story was breath taking!!!! u r good with this story it went smoothly in, not to complain.... the beginning was flowing in it diddnt grab me as much. but it was just one problem the rest was perfect you should win the contest

I have previously negatively commented on some of your stories because you permitted your characters to forego their lives as they knew it with little or no thought their spouses, children, families, or jobs for the various fetishes and pleasures provided in the story lines. You never dealt with the reprecussions of these decisions despite being a fine and creative writer. In this story you did, both for Kim's attitude towards the less privileged world and with regard to putting a limitation on her "curse". For that I applaud you. It made for a better read.

I liked the fact that Kimmy was only taken advantage of by her boyfriend, her best friend, and a few people with whom she was especially cruel. No complete strangers or disturbing miscreants. And the twist at the end was worthy of Steven Moffat.

Makes me wonder how her next encounter with Amber is going to go.

Wonderful story. As always, you write wonderfully in each of your works, but this one had something more to it. As someone else had mentioned, most stories forget the after effects of such acts. Someone strolls in, and soon the main character's life is thrown into chaos. Jobs lost, relationships ruined. While this isn't always a bad thing, it's somewhat refreshing to read a story like this with what could almost pass as a moral behind it.

Was her life 'destroyed?' In a way it was, but by the end she learned something important about herself, whether it lasts or not. And instead of ditching the 'perfect guy' just because she found some new fetish, she dumped some jerk for someone that would actually take care of her.

Again, very well done. Looking forward to more, whether continuing this story or something else.

This is good work, and I like how it show the effects of such a event. Keep up the great work.

I really enjoyed this. It was different from the usual Halloween fare. Great premise and story with a satisfying conclusion. Well done.

As always a marvelous story!

Great story!!

Just another great story by you. It was interesting and a life lesson taught in an unusual way, a bit of clarity amid all the chaos. Looking forward to enjoying more of your writing submissions.

Now that was a great story. very good.

I couldn't put my phone down had to read it all at once & after ;-) WOW what an explosion!

I'd love to read about heather treating a guy to her curse :-P

Thanks for an awesome read

Another incredible story. U R my favorite writer. The best in the business.

Heather and her friends are no better then Kim and her friends. In a depraved way they are worse

sequel needed :)

maybe heather is also cursed

Wow! That was an unusual storyline for Lit. And hotter than a blowtorch. Very, very well done!

Just how wet did you get while crafting this one?

You have out done urself , this ranks in my top five favourite stories , it left me speechless , I mean its like you were born to write , best in the business indeed

would love to read a sequel . does amber have another go with kim

I loved reading this one, it took a different approach to the whole mc / nc theme. The curse isn't life-long just life altering, and for the most part it's a good alteration. I love seeing a character grow in a crazy situation like this.

That said, i would pay to see a sequel to this one, i understand this isn't your normal theme but it was AWESOME!

If I could write i would ask to try my hand at it.

sequel PLEASE! one of the best stories on here!

Brilliant fantasy, thank you for sharing it

would be fun to find out heather is also curse so once a year she changes so that one a year shes the school slut .

ohh, it made me so hot! im so wet!!! plz make a sequal!

Tbh...your story made me so wet!!! Omg. Sequal. Pleaseeee!!

Sequel please then I wil give you my number and be your bimbo bitch slut whore

Plz write more like this I would love a sequel

I agree this needs a sequel.

Wite a sequel whee she is already married like 10 years later and she goes ibto bimbo slut mode

Even though at the end it was good, the pages 2-4 was just as stupid as it could be, I know this was just a story, but come on, as I said the only thing that saved this story was the last page have was down when the curse was lifted

Another great story of submission but from a completely different angle. Loved it.

I hope heather has some more curses in her.

What a fun story, very unique. I laughed out loud a few times too.

That I had read all your stories but I cannot remember reading this one. But that's OK because it just made the story better.

Terrific and creative story, with a lot of variety. Great job. Thank you.

Very very creative and sweet also what the fuck are you thinking? God bless that naughty twisted mind!!! Lol

I've read it a dozen different times and still come back to it. Would love to see a sequel to this, after all Kim deserves some revenge...

Absolutely loved this story. I'm not one to think all bimbo's must be stupid (thankfully, I've run into a few that weren't. And, bless them.), but it fit into your story well. I absolutely loved the ending, perhaps you could expound on her lack of inhibitions with Simon more. Or she could ask Heather for more Bimbo time every Halloween, because, you know, a lady has to prepare for halloween, and 1030 to midnight isn't enough time . . . Also, Heather still has the video, and Amber still needs another session (with a strap on, I'd say), perhaps sharing her with Simon (the lucky bastard). Anyway, keep up the stories, I, for one, am enjoying them.

I love how it ends

This story was outstanding. The wife got a very good rogering right after I read it. Thank you!

I've read a lot of your stories and think you have a great imagination and a perfect way to put it into words. This was a great example. Thank you. And please don't stop writing.

your imagination is incredible love your stories!

Your body of work is impressive and it just gets better. You took a revenge based, magic curse, and teenager gets taught a lesson story into something both sexy and realistically told. Thank you so much for the joy you bring to us all. Handsy and groping hugs with many sweet kisses to you!!!

As usual, I felt Jamsine's stories and the best hot and erotic stories. I love it. Keep writing a sequeal of this.

My title says what i wantedto say.

one of the most satisfying endings to any story on Lit. Thank you

Wow that was beautiful. I really liked how most characters changed for the better.

Great story. Very sexy as usual and again you applied hidden twists throughout that were very sexy and sensual!

Very very very very good. Just what the Dr. ordered to start the day off. LMFAO !!

Thanks so much SSL. I will be grinning all day.

Most enjoyable thank you.

Loved it would love to read more stories with Heather

Loved the story. I liked the interaction between Kimmy's rational brain and the bimbo Kimmy. It was very well written and and HOT.

So enjoyed this story, in more ways than one, thanks.

Loved the story OMG lol. Wish the curse lasted longer or we find out that later that promises or command/ orders of certain nature are binding to Ms. Patterson. Would love to see Ambers promises of her repressed ambitious wants and need as a cheerleader and dominant over her secret crush and longed for pet. Plus I think Heather also placed a binding of Mistress over her and that she had to answer to her at all times by text or buy voice. We can blur 30 min clarity and reset to ground hog day an oops in what Heather thought was a one day curse had it binding moment in it's course. I see Kimmy waking up next morning next to Simon thinking she is clear of the curse but gets a joking friendly good morning texted from Heather " Hey my ex bimbo little slut cum gusler, lol, good morning. I hope you having a good morning. It's ok , you can't talk right now with Simon there. Don't get up. Catch later today. Be a good obedient pet whore for someone today😉 wink" With that she felt her groin quiver with a hunger to feed and her ability to get up or speak gone. Simon get up excess himself with things he has to get done that morning but will see her later. Moments pass and Amber arrives or texts her pet...

Just hated seeing the curse end when plot layered open for Amber.

Live the surprised ending. Another excellent work, 5*

This was SO much fun! One of your best. Really enjoy all your work. Thank you!

I really enjoyed your story. It was so original. Good job.

641. Interesting conclusion. Most of us, I’m sure, were anxious to see how or if the curse was to be alleviated, and you did it masterfully with a gangbang prior to the clock striking midnight. For some reason I felt that you were having multiple cum episodes while writing this one and including many hot scenes. Did you?

I wouldn’t need a curse❤️❤️👅

Not bad it's a well written story

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Original themes in erotica are rare but this is a brilliantly conceived and written triumph.