All Comments on 'A Tease Too Far'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing.

Well written. well thought out and just plain tantalising. Thank you for making my evening!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Some crap silly mistakes, like apostrophes for plurals.

Really careless writing. But you have something if you tighten yourself up a bit, so this got a three.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Silly mistakes

Fuck your 3 and raise you 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Damn right fuck a 3 this was a sure fire 5 star read all the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

I really don't care about the mistakes . I'm here to read . Thanks and ca't wait for another chapter or 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just Superb

Fives all around thank you very much. Next Chapter or two.

tazdevtazdevover 11 years ago
very good

great story ,i couldtnt stop reading it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
BRAVO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOOD STORY, THEY BOTH GOT WHAT THEY WANTED, SHE GOT HER'S THE HARD WAY,FOR THE WOMEN WHO READ THIS I SAY TAKE NOTE. TEASING DOES NOT ALWAYS GO YOUR WAY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. YOU HAVE A FAN. MORE MORE MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You're a great writer who could benefit from an editor.

The story's premise and pace made for a great read. As some have pointed out, there were some errors. ("Anytime" and "Any time" have different connotations. And how many times did you use "even as"? It's like a loose thread: once you've noticed it, you keep on noticing it.) The gist of my critique isn't that you're not a good author, but that running this past another set of eyes might have caught errors in grammar, etc., that other comments are pointing out. I'd also like to see more in this storyline, but consider the suggestion to have someone proof-read and edit the story before you submit it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good work

That was hot. A little less chitchat on the studs part would have been nice. lol

pantylvr103pantylvr103over 11 years ago
Amazing!

Absolutely loved this story. Perfect amount of build up, highs and lows and climax! Thanks for writing and I can't wait to read more. Loved the panty parts too!!

KingC509KingC509about 11 years ago
Kuhdos to Nathan

Nathan showed her the trap, even let her feel how painful it would be to get trapped in it before putting it away so she would not get snared by it. But like any mammal, dangle the right bait, and the mammal will throw themselves into the trap. He played it perfect by telling her to go before he changed his mind. That was the perfect bait. Liked the way it played out through the story. Thanks

ManNamedEdManNamedEdalmost 11 years ago
Nice!!

This was a spectacular story! The build up was just right and the story itself was entertaining as hell to read. Remarkable story, great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This story, if you want to call it one, should be under sadisim or non- consensual or better yet boring. You should cut out the non-sexual stuff at least that way people could have skipped the fluff, it would've been less cruel.

girdlelovergirdleloverover 9 years ago
Excellent

A great story, well done. I agree with some of the other posters, a trip to one of the volunteer editors would have made the small errors disappear, but a great story non the less.

PaksdmPaksdmabout 9 years ago
as always...

just ignore the naysayers: great stuff - minor faults = time well wasted

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A hot tale, well told

Bravo! Thoroughly enjoyable and very hot indeed. The tables were definitely turned on his teasing auntie, much to our benefit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love

I'm addicted to the fantasy of being taken by my older sisters son, so your story did wonders for me. You had me spread and wet by the end of page one. Love your writing style, not perfect but you do understand the submissive nature within me. Enjoying your story makes me both ashamed and electric. I would die if my siter new of my desire, although she does know of my willingness to please. Since my senior year in high school she has had her way with me. Kim seduced my two best friends to lesbian sex and me to incest. I watched that first night as she contolled them. How easily they responded to her kiss. How quickly they stripped, the sounds of their moans. The smell of sex filling our room as Pam lowered her head between my siter's spread legs. The sight and sound of Stacy sucking one of Kim's breast while left hand mauled the other. My most vivid memory of that night is Kim staring across the room at me as my friends serviced her. My sister seeing me as I am now, nude, legs spread with my fingers inside my sex. That smile on her face when she knew I could not resist. At first it was private, she would call my name after our parents went to sleep and I would crawl across the room to find her nude body waiting for me, "Eat me", always her command and I would because I love her. Twenty years later and I still beg to be used by her. your wonderful story has me wondering if I would enjoy sucking her taste off your clock, Linkz

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Brilliant

Good pace, good writing. And if you think Auntie is a cock tease, you are no less of a pussy tease.

Thank you. Multiple times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot Story!

This story definitely needs a part two, where the submissive Aunt is ordered to go off of all birth control by her hung nephew Nathan, and then willingly impregnated. Maybe even having more than one child by Nathan, yet letting her husband believe that he's the father of the babies. But never knowing that the true Father is his young nephew. Just an idea or two for you to think about. Keep up the good writing.

taco1085taco1085over 7 years ago
omg

You definitely have to write a chapter 2 and more.... that is one heck of a story..... wow,,,, amazing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What a bunch of crap

I quit reading this story in chapter 5 when the nephew rammed his fingers up his aunts ass. What a way to screw up a story.

Also the sounds of "arg" "aarrgg" and "arrrrgggggghhhhhhhhh!" to show the sounds of pleasure while screwing are so false and idiotic as to be disgusting.

The old guy

jaybird1116jaybird1116almost 7 years ago
That was riveting!

Please notify me about a chapter 2:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
a wonderful story.

I loved the story. Please let me know when the next chapter is done.

LaphroaigLaphroaigover 2 years ago

What a great tale!

Stu

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