Adult Fairy Tales ? I feel as close to ten years old as I'll ever get.
Janet was droll to the bone, the bone of T.L. that is . I don't know whether to watch porn or start collecting baseball cards again. A very witty, offbeat but not off key , fabulous fable by author.
I truly enjoyed this fairy tale. I read Fantasy/SciFi and Non-Human from time to time, and this was clearly in one or the other, your choice. Yes, there were two wives 'enchanted' in this tale, but those, including their marital status, were incidental! Sweetie is clearly a future wife (and Mother!) but she has been downright blase, rather than adventuresome. Still, this is a Halloween Contest entry and my rating will reflect the category of its submission.
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Anonymous10/07/12
Load of crap. Carterhaugh is on the England/Scotland border.
There is no 'fall' there, there is autumn. There are no 'creeks', there are burns.
If you want to use a border ballad as the basis for a story, do some basic research.
Adult Fairy Tales ? I feel as close to ten years old as I'll ever get.
Janet was droll to the bone, the bone of T.L. that is . I don't know whether to watch porn or start collecting baseball cards again. A very witty, offbeat but not off key , fabulous fable by author.
I liked it.
Interesting and very well written. I, for one, will be eagerly awaiting your next posting.
Out-freaking-standing! Very well written and captivating from start to finish.
Most excellent...but...
I truly enjoyed this fairy tale. I read Fantasy/SciFi and Non-Human from time to time, and this was clearly in one or the other, your choice. Yes, there were two wives 'enchanted' in this tale, but those, including their marital status, were incidental! Sweetie is clearly a future wife (and Mother!) but she has been downright blase, rather than adventuresome. Still, this is a Halloween Contest entry and my rating will reflect the category of its submission.
Load of crap. Carterhaugh is on the England/Scotland border.
There is no 'fall' there, there is autumn. There are no 'creeks', there are burns.
If you want to use a border ballad as the basis for a story, do some basic research.
Great Story
Would Really like to read more just like it.
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