That Bitch Renee

It feels unfinished

I gave it 4 stars, but the story does not seem complete. Your character is unique and she has promise but she is surrounded by vanilla people and a male that is entirely too submissive and bland. I hope there is more, because I want to read more about this bitch, but she deserves a better mate.

well...

That's a new one, I don't think anyone has written anything remotely like that.

Pretty cool , nice twist to it . I wonder if he would have really taken it that well .

Wonderful but not enough

this is definately 4 star work with an aptitude of 5, i honestly think you could have kept going with this story. i think a good idea would be to make another based on the same genetics backing the story, it was an interesting read and very good work

you really need to continue this story. genetic engineering on that scale usually leaves behind a nasty little surprise in the fluids of a person secretes until they die