This is most excellent. The plot is good and it's well written.Very descriptive and you draw the reader in.I could picture everything.Couldn't wait to see what would happen next. Good job.
Its good but a personal put off for me is that he didnt win
I very much enjoyed it, really inventive..
An excellent beginning to start a long incredibly erotic book !
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