Not a bad piece of Eroticism, but there is a howler of an error toward the beginning: He should have used Chloroform to subdue his victims, Chorophyll is the is the chemical compound that colours plants green, and helps plants produce Oxygen.
Awesome read. I'm not superstitious at all and I'll admit some parts freaked me out. Was definitely hoping Tracy and Felicia would hook up though
what the fuck, that is some messed up shit!
I loved the story, it kept you on your toes... But it ended so suddenly, I feel like you couldn't think of an ending.
I adored this, i was glued to my screen. It's just a shame about the ending, felt rather anticlimactic, personally I'd rather not have a happy ending or one that comes about so suddenly. The rest however, fantastic!!
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