I'm glad you decided to continued with this story, although at first I did not think it needed to be continued. I can't wait to read more of this story.
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Anonymous04/06/13
so-so
took to long to write it and it was over way to fast. it almost reads like two different people wrote the series and it is still FAR from finished i hope it doesn't take as long for the next chapter to come out.
by
Anonymous05/01/13
More please.
It's been a long time between stories. I hope you will post more parts to this story as well as new stories soon.
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Anonymous05/24/14
unfulfilled
Your leaving the story unfinished. No one's story is literally finished until they die, of course, but you need to wrap this up at some point in their lives. You have a drama that is sucessful and is moving along well, and then you just cut it off in an afternoon. The Lawyer is coming over who was once her Lover, Danny is wondering (dreaming) about a threesome. Karen is coming to discuss the result of the legal papers he holds, Danny is still in two leg casts, we still don't know whether Danny and Sis become a long term couple. You are leaving way too many unanswered questions in this series. I can't give you 5stars when you don't finish the story.
English
Wonderful continuation.
I'm glad you decided to continued with this story, although at first I did not think it needed to be continued. I can't wait to read more of this story.
so-so
took to long to write it and it was over way to fast. it almost reads like two different people wrote the series and it is still FAR from finished i hope it doesn't take as long for the next chapter to come out.
More please.
It's been a long time between stories. I hope you will post more parts to this story as well as new stories soon.
unfulfilled
Your leaving the story unfinished. No one's story is literally finished until they die, of course, but you need to wrap this up at some point in their lives. You have a drama that is sucessful and is moving along well, and then you just cut it off in an afternoon. The Lawyer is coming over who was once her Lover, Danny is wondering (dreaming) about a threesome. Karen is coming to discuss the result of the legal papers he holds, Danny is still in two leg casts, we still don't know whether Danny and Sis become a long term couple. You are leaving way too many unanswered questions in this series. I can't give you 5stars when you don't finish the story.
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This was the 2nd time I read this and want to read more about these two. Loved every word..
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