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"Stocking Tales": Office Submission

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/24/12

well done

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Author's note

Story explanation: please note that some of these photos were used in another story "First day of a new job", by Vanessa65. Yet, the story you just read is a completely new story with mostly new pictures taken exclusively for this story. I wrote the story based on a few pictures used in the above mentioned story and then requested the other ones that you will see scattered throughout this story. I hope you enjoy my first, I hope, of many illustrated stocking stories.

Lastly to contact the model go search for Vanessa65.

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by EspressoBolus10/24/12

Magnificent!~

This is a first rate story and hopefully the first of many of the adventures of Amanda.

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by ndbf4ever10/24/12

Sub perfection!

Thiis story is top of the line in dom-sub storytelling! Vanessa's pic's only add to the hotness level! Looking forward to more!

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by mel_pomene10/24/12

What a marvellous story!

I did enjoy this one, silkstockingslover - your work has just got better and better with every new tale and this one has surpassed them all! Your writing was crack-on and your lovely model Vanessa looked so gorgeous in those lovely stockings - I really envy her legs!

Thank you, thank you, thank you - five stars - and many more if I could. One of the best stories ever!

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by pete_polegs10/24/12

Great story, great illustrations

Thank you very much to both you and Vanessa for a very erotic experience!

As others have said I hope we hear and see more of Amanda's sexetarial adventures.

Thanks again and best wishes to you both.

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by gotrane10/24/12

Spader, Redux?!

This story kind of reminds me of the movie, "Secretary", with James Spader from a few years back. Only then, the lady, whose name escapes me, wore pantyhose, instead of Thigh-Hi's. Could we get a sequel, or two?

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by Hamster10/24/12

More, Please!

D/S is not my usual cup of tea, but this story works on quite a few levels beyond that genre. Well crafted and well written. An oasis in a desert of mediocrity.

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by 10/24/12

A fun story

Sometimes a story is best left in your imagination. But this one was definitely enhanced by the photos of beautiful Vanessa. Thanks!

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by Anonymous10/24/12

The Best

A long time reader of this author, but this is the best story yet. Graphics only makes its better.

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by Anonymous10/24/12

What a story

This is the best story that I have ever read. I wish I could give it 10 stars

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by pmk22310/24/12

Simply the Best

As a long time fan of this Author and Our Favourite, this is simply the best ever,
and with the very sexy photos it is the ultimate package.
MORE PLEASE

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by Anonymous10/24/12

Very nice, would love to see more of Vavessa

here can I go to Vanessa's Literotica amateur Pictures Feedback Forum?

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by goodmanbez10/24/12

Bravo,Bravo !!

Great story ,great read fine job with using pics and lovely Vanessa as the appropriate model. You write well and with this story you just keep increasing the pressure on yourself to stay on top . Very pleased I found you . WRITE ON , SOON !

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by Anonymous10/25/12

Fantastic!!

This was a terrific story. Kept me interested and "erect" all the way through. Your model, Vanessa, is simply stunning!!

I would love to see more of her and am going to read your other story submissions.

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by wolfarmy10/25/12

truly a great story with greater pictures

a real stroker story so I did, please do another chapter you sweet, hot bitch.

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by MontanaSax10/25/12

More Please

Jasmine: Your stories are the best on Literotica. Please make this story into a very long series of adventures of the MILF and her Master. I want to read about Paris, and her time with Bella and with Bella and Carolyn.

Thank you for your wonderfully erotic storytelling.

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by Anonymous10/25/12

turbulent

irst time Iv'e read one of your stories very enticing will be reading more very well done ..

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by mab799110/25/12

What Did I tell you

didn't I say everyone would love this story and the pictures of the lovely Vanessa
Her pictures enhanced your story and your story was dead on for each picture.

I must agree with the other readers I would love to see more stories and I feel honored to have edited the story for you.

I read all 18 comments and read nothing but praise for your story and praise for Vanessa's pictures.

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by josephstevens10/25/12

Another Winning Story...

Thanks again for another great story, and the lovely Vanessa enhances it. Brilliant!
The desk looks cold, though, and needs a pillow between her lovely body and the hard wood!

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by Anonymous10/25/12

Back Story and Future Installments?

I would enjoy reading the back story on Carolyn's pregnancy. i bet the father is her master/boss. I hope you all write further installments with the beautiful Vanessa continuing to model, at least until her character is collared and pregnant,

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by Anonymous10/25/12

The perfect illustrated story

Can't wait to see the trip to Paris and the lesbian submission. Great storyline.3

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by mugs10110/25/12

Holy cow

That was a great story, i read it first on my iphone and the pictures didnt show up so I went out and grabbed my laptop. Your model is super sexy and brings live to your story. I would love to have her feet in stockings working me over. Great story thanks for taking the time to write it! Cant wait for more!

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by Anonymous10/26/12

Bravo!

Clap, clap, clap, clap, clap, clap!
Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!

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by Anonymous10/26/12

Fucking awesome!

One of the best, ever, here and top honors for those in the Illustrated category. Vanessa gets five hard dicks for being the perfectly stimulating embodiment of the main character.

Wow!

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by Anonymous10/26/12

The Wonderful Vanessa

How splendid to see Vanessa illustrating a good story. She adds spice to every day of my life!

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by reddbunnz10/26/12

Once again....

...you have written and exciting, kinky, and sexy story. I, too, can't wait to hear about the trip to Paris or the submission to Carolyn and Bella.

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by Anonymous10/26/12

Geat Story

Another really good story. Can't wait for the sequel and hope it is very soon.
Lovely model and hope to see more of her.
John

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by Anonymous10/27/12

FIRE

This story was so hot. The model was beautiful. Can't wait for Paris

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by John55810/27/12

Awesome

Another great story by a great storyteller. You should be very proud of your most recent tale. The writting was good; but the photography added so much. I hope your readers will get to see this model again, in a future story. The model is incredible looking. Obviously a 'real' older woman, a true and very desirable MILF! Thanks...John

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by Anonymous10/27/12

Mix Salad

Well, I can see here a Mix Salad between "Dating A Cougar" and ""xx Shades of Grey"! It needs more soul, but we all know you anglo-saxonic don't have it. No Sun, No Soul, No wine!!

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by Anonymous10/31/12

Stockings.

Vanessa makes the story even hotter, thanks to everyone involved.

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by Lee201211/01/12

Writing and Photos

While the story was well written, photos were nice, I found myself pretty much predicting what the next photo would reveal...more teasing.

But that is to be expected from some. Illustrations usually are used to provide a visual aspect to an otherwise written depiction. Helps the reader better understand and grasp the intended theme.

Don't get me wrong, Vanessa is a beautiful model, but we LOBs (lecherous old bastards) want more. :-P

Lee

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by Anonymous11/02/12

HOT! Really good story...Vanessa is the best

Thanks for a good read today. Vanessa is the finest choice for this tale. Everyone who has seen her photos must dream about having her submit..or dominate...or participate, a favorite for years.

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by Anonymous11/12/12

Fantastic Story

The content and the pictures were really hot. This happens to be a fantasy which is extremely exciting. The author did well with the content and style. Vanessa was great for the pictures. The pictures really added to the story.
For the next story, make the character slightly more sophisticated with a touch of reluctance. If anyone wants a trip to Paris with me, I could use some secretarial support.

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by mw021211/18/12

Amazing

Great story! Well written, great presentation & stunning visualisations.

Well done!!!

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by Anonymous11/19/12

Luuved the model, her feet and the black desk.Whew!

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by Anonymous11/22/12

great story.

Very nice looking model.

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by Anonymous11/28/12

Well...

Pretty predicable writing but a workmanlike job nonetheless. A leads to B leads to C and so forth, and completely divorced from any imaginable reality, BUT...what a delectable model! A mature woman with a fabulous body and pretty face. I would chase her without shame. A prize worth the candle. Much more interesting than the usual young cheesecake. All the better because she shuns the usual crotch shots and vulgarities currently in vogue. A classy women with an unabashed sensuality, holding the best in reserve. I am in love.

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by momsonromance11/29/12

Geez...

This lady cannot write a bad story if she tried.

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by Anonymous12/03/12

you are so correct. Vanessa is beautiful and would like to see a series about her escapades

Your writing, approach, use of words, imagination, and luck having a spectacular model to let us 'see' the story is amazing. As a young lesbian dom who is really into mature women for so many reasons, I would love to read about her adventures in the real world of elegant and spectacular submission.

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by Anonymous12/04/12

So beautiful a model

The model pictured here is my dream slave the no panty rule was hot
Kept me rigid the whole time

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by Anonymous12/09/12

Please write more !

You have to make a series out of this !!

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by verbicide12/11/12

Best ever

This may very well be the best thing you've ever written...from my perspective. All my buttons got pushed and nothing about the story made me blanch or facepalm. Loved it, loved it, loved it. Pure 5's and more if I could.

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by mb0400smiles12/12/12

MAGNIFICENT

Amanda is the perfect MILF.
You wtite so well and I spell so badlly.

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by Anonymous12/12/12

More, please!

Very well done! Please consider adding more to this story and include more pix of Vanessa. The photos add so much to the realism.

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by tonguelasher0112/13/12

Outstanding. More, please!

My favorite moment among many great moments was when she instantly dropped her skirt and exposed her naked cunt without any comment or warning. I hope you continue this, as you have left many suggestive lean-ins to other chapters. Her fantasy about gangbangs and her boss's hint about her services at meetings; her future lesbian use; the possibility of her public use and humiliation. Her emphatic statements that she is his to use in any way at all is almost like a challenge to him. Love to see continuations, whether or not you can get pictures of this great quality.

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by Anonymous12/16/12

Good job!

Well done! It needs some followups. Are you a dominany? ou seem to have the knowledge. I myself am a Master.

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by Anonymous12/26/12

Great Story

I just started reading your stories, and reallly enjoyed all that I've read, will continue to read more, hope they are as good. Thank You.

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by Anonymous12/31/12

More of the "Stocking Tales"

I liked the way you introduced the character, had her interview, progressed to her undressing for him and then on her knees sucking his cock. After sucking his cock and her reminded of swallowing her husbands cock and cum he fucks her on the desk. You left us hanging, We want to find out what happens when they are on a business trip together. Great pictures too. Hot sexy woman who loves her sex and sucking cock.

John

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