Your doing so good and your inspiring me! More then I could have dreamed, good job, and I can see that you've improved. Keep it up, I hope the wait will be downsized!
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Anonymous10/07/12
Excellent
I love this story. It is definitely unique, and quite the breath of fresh air from the others. Please keep entraining us masses.
Just a side note, the Natchez used spears and bows and arrows when in battle. I do not think one man, even with a Claymore, would have been able to win against 4 of my Native brothers. It was the sheer mass of people, muskets/guns, disease, and relegating us to slavery that cause our First Peoples genocide.
yes this story does get better w/each new chapter. Before I forget congrats on the editor. The way Bell and Ragon seem so share the same insecurity is almost, almost, funny. Bell from her lack of experience w/men and Ragon I guess from his past experience w/the "Bitch". I wish they hadn't been interrupted in the alley so close to their first kiss, but oh well. Now a date! I can't wait to see how this goes. I also want to add that I like the way you are going back and giving alittle background on the other Vamps. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I've been reading since you posted the first chapter and have really liked each and every chapter so far. But I have to say this recent chapter is the best so far. Keep up the great writing.
To all the people reading this thank you! The comments and feedback I am
Receiving is overwhelming! Please keep letting me know what you think! I check all the time- and change my story based on your input! Next one is already being edited- so shouldn't be too long!
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Anonymous12/24/12
Why?
Why does everyone have a bid dick in this story? (even the humans - Sandras "husband") most guys have medium dicks, hence medium and alot have small ones, trust me I know, I've dated alot of dickheads with tiny dicks.
English
I love you
Your doing so good and your inspiring me! More then I could have dreamed, good job, and I can see that you've improved. Keep it up, I hope the wait will be downsized!
Excellent
I love this story. It is definitely unique, and quite the breath of fresh air from the others. Please keep entraining us masses.
Just a side note, the Natchez used spears and bows and arrows when in battle. I do not think one man, even with a Claymore, would have been able to win against 4 of my Native brothers. It was the sheer mass of people, muskets/guns, disease, and relegating us to slavery that cause our First Peoples genocide.
Better and Better
yes this story does get better w/each new chapter. Before I forget congrats on the editor. The way Bell and Ragon seem so share the same insecurity is almost, almost, funny. Bell from her lack of experience w/men and Ragon I guess from his past experience w/the "Bitch". I wish they hadn't been interrupted in the alley so close to their first kiss, but oh well. Now a date! I can't wait to see how this goes. I also want to add that I like the way you are going back and giving alittle background on the other Vamps. Looking forward to the next chapter.
What Ragon and Bell need
is time alone without all these people and distractions. They both need to man up and talk to each other. The lack of communication is killing me.
I've been reading since you posted the first chapter and have really liked each and every chapter so far. But I have to say this recent chapter is the best so far. Keep up the great writing.
Thank you
To all the people reading this thank you! The comments and feedback I am
Receiving is overwhelming! Please keep letting me know what you think! I check all the time- and change my story based on your input! Next one is already being edited- so shouldn't be too long!
Why?
Why does everyone have a bid dick in this story? (even the humans - Sandras "husband") most guys have medium dicks, hence medium and alot have small ones, trust me I know, I've dated alot of dickheads with tiny dicks.
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