All Comments on 'Roots n Shoots'

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DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
So crates

that's pretty funny :) The rest of it is too avant garde for me, a simple plebeian.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
USING CRATES OR STACK OR HORDES OR HERD

the truth is still there....there was a bunch. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E

Look again

and then rhyming couplets that make perfect sense, what are you saying?

anyway this is a reach

Oh Fuck, I am a bohemian hedonist!

I like this:

Crawl on

In ancient Egypt I find my name

Astonishment reigns

chalk it up to a failed experiment, 5ed because it is so bizarre.

shorten the reach

kokshurkokshurover 11 years ago
way to go harry.

Stretch the form, or stretch the forum.

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
and bent

on the experiment -

This is something different alright!

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