All Comments on 'Mei Meets a Monster Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Better, but still needs work

Stop having the one girl call the other girl "babe". I've never known any girl to call her friend this. This is a term of affection from a boyfriend to a girlfriend or vise versa.

88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

I see improvement.

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