All Comments on 'Wild Waterpark Fieldtrip'

A little more buildup & character development would help the story...

Keep writing though, its not bad!

Nice story. Might want to check some spelling and I noticed the teachers name changes. Keep it up.

Great story ! The event between Simon the shy boy & the teacher is great, it would be interesting to see them hookup to play and describe the boys attributes between along with the teachers. Thank you and look forward to the next chapter.

Would love to see a part 2 with a bit more character development and another wild adventure at the park!!

What about the rest of the group?

Love the story! One of the best I've read! More please!

Teacher, you just got yourself in trouble - no Simon got into trouble. Guess that Trouble is as good a name for Ms. Centeno pussy's as any name could be. Especially allowing the cute boy to finger her, and she giving him a spur of the moment BJ. Just normal things to do at a water park, right ? Enjoyed your story but much to short - write more.