All Comments on 'Claire's Unusual Marriage'

Bit of a tease this story but enjoyable.

I loved it - I think it could have been a bit longer and more detailed, but I still loved it! Thank you, MaryR.

I would have loved to be Gerald. My helmet was leaking after the first few paragraphs. I hope there are more chapters with Monica taking an active part with her sister.

Not Fetish

Looking forward to Part 2 and beyond.

A really good story, i hope you continue with it.

i want to be claire!!!!

You could go further with this, but then again leaving it here lets our imagination work more.

Thanks for a great story, it's my second read and I liked it even more than before.

I have to agree that this is more of a 'loving wives' than a 'fetish' story, but that apart it is a great read whatever section it is in.

Thanks again Mary

It seems like the only right thing to do.

Two good looking cleaning ladies and

an odd jobs guy who who is gotten off

by the Princess.

Cute little games of spanking and touching,

seeing ones knickers, how delightfull.

I can imagine what Tea time is like, The odd

jobs man sitting at the table and having his

scone felt by the Princess as Mike has

his scone licked by Margarette.

A sweet and erotic read for sure, Thanks Mary.

A great little piece of spanking and pantie fun, thanks for sharing....off to read some of your others now xx

What went on with the characters was quite different than anything that I would have thought of. That's what's interesting about reading other peoples' work.

I did like how Claire humiliated her husband.

I was hoping for more "action," but pleased with the ending.

Once again, I find myself seduced. Terrific and sexy!

A very mild piece of erotic humiliation . A good read tho !

That story is so mischievously naughty, I love the way Claire becomes so depraved with the sisters and Gerry. Like the cuckolding wife all your stories :)

How good of Monica,who ensures that everyone has a good time-much more so than would be had if she weren't there.Michael knows this more than anyone and is held in tight control and forced to watch Claire in scenes he doesn't like-only to be rewarded later.i must go back sometime and see that it is so-about rewarding everybody-it did get complicated.One hopes that Monica's power will increase and Mike experiences much greater humiliation and reward at the hands of an all powerful kindly ringmaster. Well done Mary.

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