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WEll, you said it...
You're stupid, you're an idiot, and you're a sucker.
As well as that, you lowered your standards with that story and it ended up boring.
well damn
JPB did a dude with balls - good read. love that standard line "just different" - good read. 5
Yawn
What was the point of all that? Had no real story line. Read like a teenager and his exploits. You've done some great ones. This is not one of them, by a long shot.
Different
From your usual formula of the husband ending up back with the cheating wife after all. Reads like a tongue-in-cheek take on StangStrar's revenge stories. Pretty good in any case.
FLY FOR FREE
brings baggage home, TK U MLJ LV NV
The dude cerainly does have his trouble with women.
Maybe he should start looking in a different place for women, and perhaps he'll find an honest woman.
Thanks for the read
ANOTHER stupid man story YAWN
The entire premise of the story centers run the idea that he could trust our account on Patti Anne's explanation of why she lied the seat and shit on him the WHOLE time while they were dating .
Then suddenly she shows up at of the blue and says I made a big mistake hand for some reason he decides that Patti Anne MUST be telling the truth. He knows that she was at one point a scheming lying pathological cunt.
Yet without any proof that your characters change in any way whatsoever... he accepts her story at face value . Amazingly it blows up in his face.
Golly
Thanks
Just a fun read. Poor guy just couldn't get a break for a keeper - BUT, he sure gets a lot of good and sexy woman!
Maturation vs Repetition
This jet mechanic keeps having essentially the same year, year after year. He doesn't mature and try to improve his chances for happiness, just keeps on repeating that year! He's still getting to dip his dipstick on a variable schedule, but that will start to evaporate like a contrail. (Just like if he were faithfully married?)
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing BOB!.
Fool me once
But fool myself repeatedly? The guy is beyond stupid. He keeps chasing the same group of sluts and then wounders why they dump him. He never looks for a more 9 to 5 job or even move to days? Insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results.
As pappy would say if you play in the pig pen expect to get shit on.
An ad for a date web site
I thought same, he would be better to look for a mate on a date web site with writting in his ad "I would like to be Dad with 2 my own DNA test proof babies".
Wheeeee
What a hoot.......I wonder who will come back next......I think this guys is playing with less than a full deck.......or maybe he really knows what it's all about.
Rehashing mixture of multiple of author's own stories
JPB writes very interesting stories a lot of times. This wasn't one of those times. This is a hodge podge of several of his own stories and very poorly done as well.
Damn whaler
give the dude a break. fuck the man has posted 716 stories and poems. how many have you posted. that is a lot of writing and stories since his first posting in 2003 and he is going to use some ideas over again. hell there are only 7 basic plot lines, so nothing is new. did you know that holmes always gets his man and solves the crime? going to bitch about that too? lighten up. hate his story or the characters but with over 700 submissions some duplication is to be expected.
Lot of Fun
He certainly had an interesting time of it. The story left me wondering what was the final destiny of the two little girls...
#2 FROM THE FRYING PAN TO THE FIRE
and he's still a glutton for pain and punishment. TK U MLJ LV NV
So he's just going from one stupid cunt to another and back again?
Is he smart enough to be an aircraft mechanic? Doesn't seem so. And I hope he sent the pictures to Jim's wife. Just to share his joy! Sorry, but this guy was just too stupid to make this an entertaining story.
IT DON'T WORK
The "I love you and was just fucking him line" has been done to distraction. Sorry, it no longer works in this or other stories.
This guy is an idiot.
After telling his slut wife he's worried about a disease, he fucks her again, anyway???
Then he falls into bed with a woman that's engaged to another man then he gets back together with another woman with a questionable sexual history. He must like playing Russian Roulette. Idiot.
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