All Comments on 'The Right to Surrender'

Hope this is continued soon

Please write more! So good so far!

can not wait for part 2 soon please

I love that he makes her admit to being the whore that she is. Some of us just love that. Please write more to this story. I would love more hotness to cum while reading.

Is she going to go farther with it? Is he going to get to play with her right from proud uniform to suffering whore, just because he knows he can take her, because she wants to be taken.

Great story!

hope to see him shave her pubic bare next.

Looking forward to next part.

Please make this a serial please ^^

Get her going to work and blackmailed to suck cock of the people she locks up!

Camping here for part 2.

Omg! You've managed to hit dead on my own demented triggers. Outstanding!

I can't wait to read more. Please don't take too long. I am waiting in anticipation at reading how, with all of the pictures of her that he has taken and will be taking, that he will have a plethora of blackmail material to coerce her into doing pretty much all that he wants. Could make for some super interesting and arousing situations down the road. Please don't keep me hanging for too long!

awesome story keep up the good work!

Please continue this story and finish the haircut!

Please write more this awsome.

I loved the part of him saying he wants to make you pregnant. I would love to see that plot.

This was an awesome story, still waiting on part 2.

She gave herself to him, thinking she knew the limits. You showed him taking her from that comfort zone to the edge of beyond, when are you going to show him taking her beyond her comfort, to the edge of both of their needs.

Great story, would love a second part to this one :)

I've long enjoyed your stories Dark Cloud but this may be the best yet. Hope you get time to add to this soon, maybe all these comments might inspire you.

Are we going to see more this was a great begining.

I've never been big on first person stories but I think this is one of the best stories I've seen and I hope for more.

This is amazing more please!

You have the ability to look into my mind and see what I truly crave. I am shaking and soaked because I have had fantasies about this for years. Would love to talk? Contact me if you do as well.

So hot🔥🔥🔥to be helpless at the hands of a sexual pervert who will use and abuse you as he desires!