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Ocean Sunrise

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by Anonymous

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by tazz31710/16/12

IF THE HANDS COULD PAINT

what the sky reveals. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by twelveoone10/16/12

5ed

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by Angeline10/16/12

Also 5ed this poem

It seems like the perfect companion piece to your other submission. Have you considered putting them together somehow? Maybe as Parts 1 and 2?

Thank you for the read. Really a lovely, spare piece.

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