u certainly have a way of spinning a tale. keep it (and me) up!
Your another one of the many awesome writers here who needs to write more.
I liked your story very much, but for one problem and that is with your spelling, as I was never good at spelling myself but I sure noticed your mistakes very quickly so if you could get an editor and proof reader to pick up your mistakes before you publish any future stories would be good. Other that that good story and keep them coming.
I corrected all my mistakes on my blog at:
Your story was hard to read with the spelling errors PLUS why are you so hung up on 'fifteen'? (length, time &etc.)
And why a 15" dick? (This makes the story hard to imagine and would send most women running.)
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