One of the very top stories in the incest, or any other, category. Really first-rate writing.
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Anonymous06/01/16
I Thought Book 1 Was As Good As It Gets .....
... but this is every bit a match for it, and maybe even a fraction better. Unlike a lot of the stories on here the sex isn't the core of the tale, it is just a beautifully integrated part of it. Written less explicitly it would be worthy of plaudits on any literary site. Exquisitely written so that it draws on the reader's emotions as much as those of the characters. I laughed, I had lumps in my throat, and more than once I had tears rolling down my face. Amazing effects on a elderly cynical curmudgeon.
Thought it was a great story, full of love, I lost my mom 4 years ago, not a day goes by that I don't think of her, to feel her touch and to hear her say I love you son. It's so hard for me even now, for I was the youngest of two sons, I tell ALL you readers, love your mom's and dad's with all your heart's, for one day, with the blink of an eye, they will be gone, trust me I know what I speak of.
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Anonymous06/22/16
Very good
Will we ever hear Deirdre's story, I hope so
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Anonymous07/12/16
A Great Story
CP Baudelaire: A Lot of deep thought went into this narrative.
I would not have recognized this as a continuation of Bk.01. The relationship and patterns of behaviour were totally different, and the new storyline was so unrelated to the first it could have been a standalone.
With the cloak and dagger to secure a new identity including Passports, I was surprised he never adopted the habit of calling her by her first name instead of always as mom. In the course of general conversation it would have been so easy to slip. And why, oh why, would they out themselves to a food critic in public, after just meeting two otherwise total strangers, at his place of business?
This is a great story and very well written! You should very much consider becoming a professional writer as this is certainly the best story I have ever read on this site or any others!
Keep on writing and Best Wishes
Mike
I've tried to write this several times, it's the first time a story has both made me fall in love with it, and make me hate it at the same time. First the love; excellent character development and absolutely spot on psychology dealing with the angst of mother son incest. Truly an incredible effort, whether it was your first or not. It was good enough for me to continue reading past the point where I close most stories and mentally mark down the authors name, never to read their works again. That point was not the rather contrived feeling cloak and dagger passport debacle, it was the fact you never made Rick and Jen into a full partnership. It turned into a mom/dom, son/sub story. The partnership was what I was hoping for in the second book, but you turned the mother into a whore who put her own needs above their commitment to each other. Jen spread her legs for a lesbian lover and would have gratefully done the same for her son/grandsons dick, top that off with the Jason character turning his mother into an object, I mean please, mauling your mother in the kitchen in front of your lover AND your father? That's a straight up domination play there. Then you wrote Rick as grateful that Jen was so horny after the groping...... Oh and having Rick leave his own home so the lesbian love could take place, nice cuckolding move there. Jen, after finding out about her daughters love for Rick certainly didn't encourage her to go and take her shot, at least until she (Jen) was safely dead. Now the redemption, you left it so I can dream that at least Rick has his mom all to himself in heaven, which was all he wanted throughout both books. Thank God you didn't come up with "as Rick goes toward the light, he sees his beloved Jen, she's on her knees with a somewhat familiar looking man pounding into her ass from behind as she grunts and squeals in delight, Jen looks up and gasps, "Ricky, my one and only love, come meet your real daddy". I should point out that I am strongly opposed to cheating in any form, be it tongue, dick or dildo, and that stems from real life experiences.
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Anonymous11/02/16
Thank You
Thank you for this beautiful work. You have raised the bar for submissions to this site. Clearly you have real talent and I hope you continue to develop it. Perhaps one day I will come across one of your works in my local bookstore.
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Anonymous11/03/16
OMGosh!!!
What a wonderful story!!!! Like nothing you would anticipate on the kind of site!! Dry well done!!! This story had true feeling to it! A true love story!! Thank you for sharing your awesome talent!
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Anonymous02/01/17
Part 1
What happend to part 1 of the story?
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Anonymous02/01/17
Masterpiece.
This was truly one of the most compelling, engrossing, and frankly emotional stories that I have ever read. You truly have a gift. I believe that you should publish this work of art. That is truly what this book is. I came here poking for a book to send me over the sexual edge. What I found was a masterpiece that suspended me.
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Anonymous02/05/17
Cant find book 1 please help
Have read the comments 2nd don't want to read this first can you help me locate book 1,chers Dave
Apologies to my readers. I'm having a wrangle with the Lit folks about the first part of BTB. It's been flagged (after 5 years online!) because of some underage complaint. There's not a lot I can do about it right now, since some bluenose got their knickers in a twist. I am trying to figure out a way to edit things to meet "requirements" without gutting the story. I'll be resubmitting it as soon as I have time - probably next week.
CPB
CPBaudelaire, you have written a true masterpiece. This was a massive undertaking on your part and the result is something you can surely take pride in. It is hard to believe this came from a first time author. The depth of this story is indeed compelling reading and it captures the range of emotion, eroticism and sensuality so awsomely.
You laid the foundation for this epic so very well in Bk. 1, and it allowed the reader to fully understand the relationship that developed between mother and son. Whether one likes to read in this genre or not this is worthy of praise. I have read this story twice before you were forced to take down Bk. 1 and hope that at some time in the future it can be reposted. I truly hope to see more writing from you in this genre.
English
Simply Great!
Thank you very much for this wonderful story.
Great story, great writing
One of the very top stories in the incest, or any other, category. Really first-rate writing.
I Thought Book 1 Was As Good As It Gets .....
... but this is every bit a match for it, and maybe even a fraction better. Unlike a lot of the stories on here the sex isn't the core of the tale, it is just a beautifully integrated part of it. Written less explicitly it would be worthy of plaudits on any literary site. Exquisitely written so that it draws on the reader's emotions as much as those of the characters. I laughed, I had lumps in my throat, and more than once I had tears rolling down my face. Amazing effects on a elderly cynical curmudgeon.
Well Done
This was a great read. I only wish that Marcia & Jen would've exchanged sons for a few hours. That would've been an interesting twist to the story.
Brilliant
I love it, read it twice. Lesbian love I admitted bit spoils IMO but 5 stars overall!
Normally, I never read father-daughter storyline as never interested in this area. But I admitted to curiously what happened to Dee Dee and Ricky.
Great Story
Thought it was a great story, full of love, I lost my mom 4 years ago, not a day goes by that I don't think of her, to feel her touch and to hear her say I love you son. It's so hard for me even now, for I was the youngest of two sons, I tell ALL you readers, love your mom's and dad's with all your heart's, for one day, with the blink of an eye, they will be gone, trust me I know what I speak of.
Very good
Will we ever hear Deirdre's story, I hope so
A Great Story
CP Baudelaire: A Lot of deep thought went into this narrative.
I enjoyed it from day to day reading.
D Grimm
Touching AND Smoking hot!
I liked the story,. My first mother/son. What happened to Mitch and Molly? Did I miss a paragraph? Very impressed.
What a story.
If we hadn't been told
I would not have recognized this as a continuation of Bk.01. The relationship and patterns of behaviour were totally different, and the new storyline was so unrelated to the first it could have been a standalone.
With the cloak and dagger to secure a new identity including Passports, I was surprised he never adopted the habit of calling her by her first name instead of always as mom. In the course of general conversation it would have been so easy to slip. And why, oh why, would they out themselves to a food critic in public, after just meeting two otherwise total strangers, at his place of business?
Great
This is a great story and very well written! You should very much consider becoming a professional writer as this is certainly the best story I have ever read on this site or any others!
Keep on writing and Best Wishes
Mike
Great work
An excellent read. I enjoyed everything about the story. I hope you will continue to write.
I've read alot of these tip of stories. And id have to say this one is the best one of them all thank you for this wonderful peace
Love, Hate and Redemption
I've tried to write this several times, it's the first time a story has both made me fall in love with it, and make me hate it at the same time. First the love; excellent character development and absolutely spot on psychology dealing with the angst of mother son incest. Truly an incredible effort, whether it was your first or not. It was good enough for me to continue reading past the point where I close most stories and mentally mark down the authors name, never to read their works again. That point was not the rather contrived feeling cloak and dagger passport debacle, it was the fact you never made Rick and Jen into a full partnership. It turned into a mom/dom, son/sub story. The partnership was what I was hoping for in the second book, but you turned the mother into a whore who put her own needs above their commitment to each other. Jen spread her legs for a lesbian lover and would have gratefully done the same for her son/grandsons dick, top that off with the Jason character turning his mother into an object, I mean please, mauling your mother in the kitchen in front of your lover AND your father? That's a straight up domination play there. Then you wrote Rick as grateful that Jen was so horny after the groping...... Oh and having Rick leave his own home so the lesbian love could take place, nice cuckolding move there. Jen, after finding out about her daughters love for Rick certainly didn't encourage her to go and take her shot, at least until she (Jen) was safely dead. Now the redemption, you left it so I can dream that at least Rick has his mom all to himself in heaven, which was all he wanted throughout both books. Thank God you didn't come up with "as Rick goes toward the light, he sees his beloved Jen, she's on her knees with a somewhat familiar looking man pounding into her ass from behind as she grunts and squeals in delight, Jen looks up and gasps, "Ricky, my one and only love, come meet your real daddy". I should point out that I am strongly opposed to cheating in any form, be it tongue, dick or dildo, and that stems from real life experiences.
Thank You
Thank you for this beautiful work. You have raised the bar for submissions to this site. Clearly you have real talent and I hope you continue to develop it. Perhaps one day I will come across one of your works in my local bookstore.
OMGosh!!!
What a wonderful story!!!! Like nothing you would anticipate on the kind of site!! Dry well done!!! This story had true feeling to it! A true love story!! Thank you for sharing your awesome talent!
Part 1
What happend to part 1 of the story?
Masterpiece.
This was truly one of the most compelling, engrossing, and frankly emotional stories that I have ever read. You truly have a gift. I believe that you should publish this work of art. That is truly what this book is. I came here poking for a book to send me over the sexual edge. What I found was a masterpiece that suspended me.
Cant find book 1 please help
Have read the comments 2nd don't want to read this first can you help me locate book 1,chers Dave
Regarding Book 1 Beyond the Borderline
Apologies to my readers. I'm having a wrangle with the Lit folks about the first part of BTB. It's been flagged (after 5 years online!) because of some underage complaint. There's not a lot I can do about it right now, since some bluenose got their knickers in a twist. I am trying to figure out a way to edit things to meet "requirements" without gutting the story. I'll be resubmitting it as soon as I have time - probably next week.
CPB
What A Great Story
CPBaudelaire, you have written a true masterpiece. This was a massive undertaking on your part and the result is something you can surely take pride in. It is hard to believe this came from a first time author. The depth of this story is indeed compelling reading and it captures the range of emotion, eroticism and sensuality so awsomely.
You laid the foundation for this epic so very well in Bk. 1, and it allowed the reader to fully understand the relationship that developed between mother and son. Whether one likes to read in this genre or not this is worthy of praise. I have read this story twice before you were forced to take down Bk. 1 and hope that at some time in the future it can be reposted. I truly hope to see more writing from you in this genre.
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