At first I started to read this to get my fix. But as I kept reading and reading, I felt a wide range of emotions. I felt happy, I felt angry, I felt scared, I felt aroused, I felt like I was there. Like I was with Jenny. I fell in love with her. So much so that I felt the emotions of dating, marriage, and parenthood. I have read all kinds of books but I have never cried like I have with this. I am still in mourning. Still crying. What did you do to me CPB! You ruined me for all other taboo stories.
Everyone should read this! And it should be made into a movie.
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Anonymous05/31/14
Thanks you don't know how much this has affected me
I'm not ashamed to say that you touched my heart more than any story on this site I to was in love with my mom and to scared to tell her you made me feel all the pain and joy you made me laugh and cry I felt like I was part of the story Please write more
What a fantastic story. Well written. No more words can describe.
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Anonymous06/04/14
Great read
I took my time reading the entire saga and found it both well written and intriguing. One wonders how often this might actually happen.
Writing online one has the attendant problem with typos and proof reading. The proof reading had consistency I the entire story and though there were typos, they did not detract from the over all story.
I enjoyed the story very much and could have followed the entire family's relationship for the next few generations. That would have been interesting to say the least, but there can only be one 'first chapter' to a story of this type.
Thanks for a great read. It was warm and full of love with just enough 'nasty' to be realistic. Look forward to any other saga's you write.
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Anonymous06/08/14
Touching wonderfully.
Thats one of the most heartfelt stories I have read in a long time. The characters are engaging and I have learned a lot about the patience love.
Superb story telling.
Thank you.
Bleh, the first book was really good, I feel like it was amazingly, written and the bond between Mother and Son were so strong when she finally decided to accept him as her lover. Despite all the cheesy, momma love and stupid puns. The 2nd book, continued the cheesiness, nothing really escalated until a bit further then half way through. I really disliked how Jen slept with Gina. I know it was urged on by Rick because it was a desire, that she ended up having but that's really no excuse, for her doing that, but eh that's just me. At this point, I kinda disliked Jen, but I felt so sad when near the end. Overall, i'm torn, it was worth the read.
So I think we all feel the same about Jen and Gina. I felt the piercing pain of jealousy at that point. But I guess this shows how much Rick loves her that he is willing to do that for her. This story really pulled and tugged at my heart like no other story I have read. This inlcudes all books.
I wouldn't never do anything with my mother. I find that utterly repulsive. But I love the emotional entanglement that is suggestive of a taboo relationship. Especially that of mother and son. I think and emotional and sexual relationship of that caliber cannot be compared. I hope I make sense.
Anyway, don't you all think that if this was a movie Amy Adams would be the perfect Jenny?
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Anonymous06/22/14
Amazing and beautiful
I have read the entire story from the beginning it us the most beautiful and touching story but it is also one of the sexiest i have read
Thank you
Although I never experienced the same feelings for my mother I truly enjoyed the story. It is very well written and has much to make one think and contemplate on biases and prejudices. I enjoyed it very much and I voted 5 which I have rarely done,
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Anonymous06/29/14
MrFlufflyCat
I totally agree with chapter one being beautiful and the mommy lover, son lover being corny as all hell but even more so it was dangerous to keep using those terms where others could overhear them (restaurant staff, their kids, etc). How did all this love making/fucking go on and not once did the kids ever wonder why they were calling each other Mommy/Son? I stopped reading after Rick was okay with his wife fucking their son. So I skipped to the last page and what do I see? The daughter crawling into bed with her dad! FTW?!? The two women sleeping together was unnecessary and bad enough but then there's Jase wanting to screw the mom and later on the daughter wanting to screw her dad. It would have been a flawless tale without all of that. Just have both parties love each other, raise great kids, have a good long life and then freaking die. THE END! Having them sleep with other people made their love seem watered down to me and not as all consuming as they professed! But that's just my opinion.
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Anonymous07/09/14
Kudos
After reading both stories, I read all the comments. It is amazing how many readers lives you have touched. Also how amazing the book was for a first time author. I have never had an incestous relationship. I can however remember getting a hardon once at age twelve when my mother spooned me. It was shortly after that when I started masturbating. Also, for me there was a little too much unrealistic sex. I also remain surprised that they weren't found out by saying Mom and Son in so many public places. Alas, I am being "picky". This will surely end up in the HOF!!!!
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Anonymous07/25/14
perfect
This story entered my heart man.. Amazing. .. Almost cried after rode it all :) Thanks for making such stories... And please make more..
by
Anonymous08/01/14
Disappointing
Why do so many of these incest stories seem to take place in that parallel universe where everyone ends up having sex with a relative? Honestly, if you're trying to portray an incestuous relationship as a special, forbidden "us against the world" love that's worth going against society to pursue, then it should be unique. You dilute the appeal of the story when you have everyone else doing it. Especially bad was having the guy switch to his daughter after his mom dies.
Oh well, as least it didn't end up in another family orgy.
It was amazing their relationship spoke of love then the hot nasty sex they had but the mutual feeling they had of deep passionate indescribable love they had and share for almost 50 years. It didn't matter the he was her son all that mattered is that they made each other happy in love for a long time. the fact that their children were so accepting of it really touched my heart because they understood the passion and love that they had for each other and that that love alone broke down the barriers of the fact that they were mother and son. It really touched my heart because it shows and explains in so many ways how long conquers not just the feeling of sex but what it did for them it unleashed the true meaning of what love can do for you and how accepting other people will be of it once they realize how special it really is.
simply one of the best stories ive read on here and ive read it twice beautifuly written i cried both times i read it i hope you add what a story from dee dee as id like to see where the story will go great writing i hope theres more to come ive read everything from you so far keep up the awesome writing
This was the best love story I have ever read on so many levels. Passion, excitement, suspense, sadness - the story had it all. I hope you continue writing.
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Anonymous10/20/14
A beautiful, erotic and heart-warming tale
I usually dont comment on stories here but this was more than well deserved. This is a masterpiece and you are one very talented writer. I could really connect with the characters and the range of emotions I went through was just unbelievable. It was like watching a classic movie that you hope will never end. If there are awards for stories here, this will undoubtedly be my top vote. Brilliantly done. Thank you.
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Anonymous11/26/14
top 2
This is one of the top 2 stories of my 50+ years of reading. Thank you seems so inadequate...
Only one other story ever got tears in my eyes!
I can't say it any better thatn the others did. I laughed, I cried, I couldn't take it in fast enough. A magnificent epic, sweeping in its scope while making the characters so accessible and easy to care about. So many other stories waiting to be told - I'm curious about the lives of Marsh and Shaun, Gina and Paul, and all the kids - but I doubt anything could surpass this story. I loved Threads: The Island, but your stories are superior. Less graphic sex and it's a whole mainstream miniseries or movie. Thank you for some of the best writing I've seen in any genre.
Bravo, bravo! That's all I can really say, and thank you so very much for this epic tale of love.
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Anonymous02/26/15
My Thanks
I have to thank you for your work of art. It far and exceeds any presumption I may have had. This work ranks up with the top literary works of art in my opinion. How the story line flows, and characters meld together is beyond comprehension. How you managed to pull all the sub plots into a complete web, is totally unbelievable. Please, wrote more works of literary art.
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Anonymous03/19/15
holy shit!
Holy shit!
by
Anonymous03/19/15
Bravo!
Bravo!
by
Anonymous03/20/15
An Epic Tale of True Love
Of all of the gifts we are given by God, Love is by far the greatest gift of all. The prank he placed with it is that we have no control over who we fall in love with. You have given us a love story of emence impact that I found to be truely moving and a true work of art. Real love is so rare in this day and age. No matter what others may think, you should never pass up the opportunity to have real love come into your life. No matter whom it is with. Never pass up on the chance to bring true love into your heart, but hold it dearly and thank the Almighty for the chance to hear " I Love You"
I just finished reading this incredible story. CPB you have this 57 year old man weeping. You are so good at creating believable characters and intriguing story lines, mixing great sex along with the good and the bad that happens in everyones life. I suppose I could complain about the extreme length, spelling and punctuation errors etc. like some others have, but that would be ridiculous. Please, please keep writing incredible stories!
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Anonymous05/19/15
Story in general.
This story grabbed me in the opening chapter. I'm glad I was able to read the whole
story. I don't think I would have liked it as much.
I rated this story with 5 stars. That isn't enough!
Thanks for giving us the story. I look forward to the next story.
Thanks.
Going through this great story was an experience beyond words ... ! You laugh , you weep , you hurt ...as the protagonists do ....very rarely words have played so much with the mind , thought and feelings of the reader ..a pity we have no ratings beyond 5* !
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Anonymous06/15/15
Jesus, Mary,& Joseph!
I've read this twice now. I guess this makes me a sentimental fool, but in reading this I think of my wife. She was fifteen years older than I and discussed with me early in our relationship about the almost certainty that she would leave me first. She, of course, did in due cours. But only after many years. This stirs memories in me that I'd thouht I'd sucessfully put away. My daughter came to me soon after and we, also, had some good years together. But she had always been fragile and left me alone ultimately also. I love this story. But in the end, I have outlived my wife and daughter. My two great loves. You make me sad with resurrected memorise, but happy that I still have them. Ricky and Jenny's story is full of love, making love, frenzied fucking, heartache, tragedy, and wonder. A lot of sex is shoehorned into this story, but it is the story of their lives also. So, thank you for that. Most people that write a Novel or even an Autobiography completely leave out the importance of their romantic life and how important a good sex-life is to a good relationship. I'd like to read Diedra's account of their life together. As well, I'd be interested to read about Anna's life, but most of all I would like to read the story of Emily. She is one of the most amazing characters herein and so little is said of her beyond her hairaising escapes from death. I'm a little suprised that it was Diedra instead of Emily who took her place by Rick's side in the end. I thought Emily might put her ministry on hold and make a new life with Rick. She would have been good for him nearer the end of his life as she was 'the apple of his eye' at the beginning of her life. Well, thats all for me I guess.
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Anonymous07/02/15
What a story!!
You have a glorious way of telling it my friend, I'm in a nursing home due to an accident. I stayed up two days reading it, if you decide to write more I'm interested.
Good story, well excecuted and well written, ten stars.
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Anonymous07/06/15
Amazing Story
As a regular goer of this section, I have to say well done. This story, especially Bk 01, truly impacted and kept the reader at interest with what was transpiring. Every heart wrenching moment: the 4th of Juky, the potential break up, the childrens' birth, the wedding; all of it drew me and and I truly enjoyed every moment of it.
The one key item that threw me off, however, was the sudden lesbian interest between Gina and Jen. I was more attached to the two key persons of the story, and to see Rock and Jen finally be okay with such a growing relationship so fast seemed out of context. They were so adaptive and so in love that it was hard to focus on one relationship or the other, and my heart will always be set to the two that have grown over the 40+ pages. Otherwise, this story was spectacular! I will be overjoyed to show this one day to the own joy in my life, my son.
- Alicia
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Anonymous08/16/15
awesome...awesome...awesome!
Love the way you write! The longness of the story is it's strength. I didn't want it to end. Each sex scene was unique, which was good, for you know how you can like a story then hate that the sex is all the same! Lol
I read chapter 1 to this story left a comment accordingly and gave you 3 stars. I must say you got your act together with chapter 2 and WOW you got 5 stars this time round. BUT for me this story is far from finish for example. What happened to your characters Molly Paul Mitch and GIna etc etc. did Fiona and Jason take over his business??? What happened to Emily.. I must say your ending was a complete surprise , I thought of all people Emily, Daddy's little favourite would be the one who replaced Jen and not Deidre to look after all his needs, sexually or otherwise...they just seemed to have that special bond..Lastly if it was you're desired affect for tears to fall at the end you got a bucket full from me...once again well done....
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Anonymous12/12/15
memoeies
I could not put this down from beginning to end. Just as I finished this with tears my grand daughter who lives with us and as severe ADHD and attachment disorder and is a right hand full just bought me a birthday card with her own money without telling anyone. In my life right now that meant a lot to me. Keep up the good work
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Anonymous01/11/16
Fantastic
I found myself captivated from the beginning and although life would get in the way, I looked forward to sitting down and reading more of the story. I am normally not an emotional person (typical guy here), I actually found myself getting choked up during parts of the story, and laughing at other parts. In my opinion, any story that brings out the emotions of the reader is very well written. The only negative feedback I could offer would be in agreement with another comment I read. I would have liked to know what happened with Gina and Paul, Marsha and Sean, and I would have expected Emily to be the one to be with her dad more than Deidre. However, the way the story was written I have no real complaints. Outstanding story!
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Anonymous01/21/16
JEN & RICKY
Just finished ' Beyond the Borderline'. The passion for one another that you gave Jen and Rick is unmatched by any story I have ever read. Bravo... Bravo... Bravo. Thank you for this
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Anonymous01/28/16
Jennifer&Ricky
Absolutely Sterling! You have set a very high standard for this genre. Very high indeed. It's too bad we will not be able to read about Jennifer and Ricky again, I was left with a lonely, hollow feeling at the conclusion of Ricky's life. Well done!
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Anonymous01/28/16
Jennifer and Ricky
Best of genre! I was left with a hollow feeling at the conclusion of Ricky's life. Well done!
Massive work. Wanted to stop reading many times, but felt compelled to continue. Wanted to know where the next curve ball went. Loved, the loving the story, told. Sex was just part of it, as it is in life. Congratulations and thank you.
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Anonymous02/22/16
Heart wrenching and beautiful
I've been reading this on and off for the better part of two years. I know that just sounds lazy, but early on I felt it was going to be a roller coaster of ups and downs. And even then I suspected it would be a painfully finalized ending.
I've never felt so close to fictional characters before. There's a specific similarity to my life that drew me in and held me tight. I think many people that fall deep into this story will share that same connection.
To touch on the writing style, it is in a word sublime. It never felt forced, only natural and it flowed like a winding river, always something new around the bend.
This is an erotic story site, so ignoring a review of that would be silly. And to sum it up, it was single handdedly the most erotic thing I've ever read. I read some of the sex scenes out loud to my wife who has admitted it was the most loving and erotic scenes she's ever experienced.
To close it up, I must say thank you to those involved with the writing. This was a mountain of literature I would have paid good money to have in a hard back.
Thank you so much. This will echo in my mind as if I took the journey myself. Looking forward to another read through!
English
wow
wowee wow wow
Erotic and Heartfelt
At first I started to read this to get my fix. But as I kept reading and reading, I felt a wide range of emotions. I felt happy, I felt angry, I felt scared, I felt aroused, I felt like I was there. Like I was with Jenny. I fell in love with her. So much so that I felt the emotions of dating, marriage, and parenthood. I have read all kinds of books but I have never cried like I have with this. I am still in mourning. Still crying. What did you do to me CPB! You ruined me for all other taboo stories.
Everyone should read this! And it should be made into a movie.
Thanks you don't know how much this has affected me
I'm not ashamed to say that you touched my heart more than any story on this site I to was in love with my mom and to scared to tell her you made me feel all the pain and joy you made me laugh and cry I felt like I was part of the story Please write more
Absolutly the best story I have read ANYWHERE!
That was the best story I have read anywhere. Either here on Literotica or in a library book.
When I finished I just grabbed my wife in the biggest hug. I was so sad.
Incredible
.........
Thank you for such a beautiful emotional tender love story!
Best wishes,
Tempo.
What a fantastic story. Well written. No more words can describe.
Great read
I took my time reading the entire saga and found it both well written and intriguing. One wonders how often this might actually happen.
Writing online one has the attendant problem with typos and proof reading. The proof reading had consistency I the entire story and though there were typos, they did not detract from the over all story.
I enjoyed the story very much and could have followed the entire family's relationship for the next few generations. That would have been interesting to say the least, but there can only be one 'first chapter' to a story of this type.
Thanks for a great read. It was warm and full of love with just enough 'nasty' to be realistic. Look forward to any other saga's you write.
Touching wonderfully.
Thats one of the most heartfelt stories I have read in a long time. The characters are engaging and I have learned a lot about the patience love.
Superb story telling.
Thank you.
Torn
Bleh, the first book was really good, I feel like it was amazingly, written and the bond between Mother and Son were so strong when she finally decided to accept him as her lover. Despite all the cheesy, momma love and stupid puns. The 2nd book, continued the cheesiness, nothing really escalated until a bit further then half way through. I really disliked how Jen slept with Gina. I know it was urged on by Rick because it was a desire, that she ended up having but that's really no excuse, for her doing that, but eh that's just me. At this point, I kinda disliked Jen, but I felt so sad when near the end. Overall, i'm torn, it was worth the read.
This should be a movie!
So I think we all feel the same about Jen and Gina. I felt the piercing pain of jealousy at that point. But I guess this shows how much Rick loves her that he is willing to do that for her. This story really pulled and tugged at my heart like no other story I have read. This inlcudes all books.
I wouldn't never do anything with my mother. I find that utterly repulsive. But I love the emotional entanglement that is suggestive of a taboo relationship. Especially that of mother and son. I think and emotional and sexual relationship of that caliber cannot be compared. I hope I make sense.
Anyway, don't you all think that if this was a movie Amy Adams would be the perfect Jenny?
Amazing and beautiful
I have read the entire story from the beginning it us the most beautiful and touching story but it is also one of the sexiest i have read
Thank you
A fine tale
Although I never experienced the same feelings for my mother I truly enjoyed the story. It is very well written and has much to make one think and contemplate on biases and prejudices. I enjoyed it very much and I voted 5 which I have rarely done,
MrFlufflyCat
I totally agree with chapter one being beautiful and the mommy lover, son lover being corny as all hell but even more so it was dangerous to keep using those terms where others could overhear them (restaurant staff, their kids, etc). How did all this love making/fucking go on and not once did the kids ever wonder why they were calling each other Mommy/Son? I stopped reading after Rick was okay with his wife fucking their son. So I skipped to the last page and what do I see? The daughter crawling into bed with her dad! FTW?!? The two women sleeping together was unnecessary and bad enough but then there's Jase wanting to screw the mom and later on the daughter wanting to screw her dad. It would have been a flawless tale without all of that. Just have both parties love each other, raise great kids, have a good long life and then freaking die. THE END! Having them sleep with other people made their love seem watered down to me and not as all consuming as they professed! But that's just my opinion.
Kudos
After reading both stories, I read all the comments. It is amazing how many readers lives you have touched. Also how amazing the book was for a first time author. I have never had an incestous relationship. I can however remember getting a hardon once at age twelve when my mother spooned me. It was shortly after that when I started masturbating. Also, for me there was a little too much unrealistic sex. I also remain surprised that they weren't found out by saying Mom and Son in so many public places. Alas, I am being "picky". This will surely end up in the HOF!!!!
perfect
This story entered my heart man.. Amazing. .. Almost cried after rode it all :) Thanks for making such stories... And please make more..
Disappointing
Why do so many of these incest stories seem to take place in that parallel universe where everyone ends up having sex with a relative? Honestly, if you're trying to portray an incestuous relationship as a special, forbidden "us against the world" love that's worth going against society to pursue, then it should be unique. You dilute the appeal of the story when you have everyone else doing it. Especially bad was having the guy switch to his daughter after his mom dies.
Oh well, as least it didn't end up in another family orgy.
Awesome story
I was spellbound reading this story! Great writing!
Amazingly Perfect
It was amazing their relationship spoke of love then the hot nasty sex they had but the mutual feeling they had of deep passionate indescribable love they had and share for almost 50 years. It didn't matter the he was her son all that mattered is that they made each other happy in love for a long time. the fact that their children were so accepting of it really touched my heart because they understood the passion and love that they had for each other and that that love alone broke down the barriers of the fact that they were mother and son. It really touched my heart because it shows and explains in so many ways how long conquers not just the feeling of sex but what it did for them it unleashed the true meaning of what love can do for you and how accepting other people will be of it once they realize how special it really is.
the best
simply one of the best stories ive read on here and ive read it twice beautifuly written i cried both times i read it i hope you add what a story from dee dee as id like to see where the story will go great writing i hope theres more to come ive read everything from you so far keep up the awesome writing
Bravo Zulu
This was the best love story I have ever read on so many levels. Passion, excitement, suspense, sadness - the story had it all. I hope you continue writing.
A beautiful, erotic and heart-warming tale
I usually dont comment on stories here but this was more than well deserved. This is a masterpiece and you are one very talented writer. I could really connect with the characters and the range of emotions I went through was just unbelievable. It was like watching a classic movie that you hope will never end. If there are awards for stories here, this will undoubtedly be my top vote. Brilliantly done. Thank you.
top 2
This is one of the top 2 stories of my 50+ years of reading. Thank you seems so inadequate...
Only one other story ever got tears in my eyes!
Brilliant!
My fucking life has become better when I read your story.
Magnificent
I can't say it any better thatn the others did. I laughed, I cried, I couldn't take it in fast enough. A magnificent epic, sweeping in its scope while making the characters so accessible and easy to care about. So many other stories waiting to be told - I'm curious about the lives of Marsh and Shaun, Gina and Paul, and all the kids - but I doubt anything could surpass this story. I loved Threads: The Island, but your stories are superior. Less graphic sex and it's a whole mainstream miniseries or movie. Thank you for some of the best writing I've seen in any genre.
Touched
Thank you,
Thank you,
THANK YOU.
This was a beautiful work of art.
Standing Ovation
Bravo, bravo! That's all I can really say, and thank you so very much for this epic tale of love.
My Thanks
I have to thank you for your work of art. It far and exceeds any presumption I may have had. This work ranks up with the top literary works of art in my opinion. How the story line flows, and characters meld together is beyond comprehension. How you managed to pull all the sub plots into a complete web, is totally unbelievable. Please, wrote more works of literary art.
holy shit!
Holy shit!
Bravo!
Bravo!
An Epic Tale of True Love
Of all of the gifts we are given by God, Love is by far the greatest gift of all. The prank he placed with it is that we have no control over who we fall in love with. You have given us a love story of emence impact that I found to be truely moving and a true work of art. Real love is so rare in this day and age. No matter what others may think, you should never pass up the opportunity to have real love come into your life. No matter whom it is with. Never pass up on the chance to bring true love into your heart, but hold it dearly and thank the Almighty for the chance to hear " I Love You"
Thanks
Wonderfully written. I enjoyed reading this.
Wow.
I just finished reading this incredible story. CPB you have this 57 year old man weeping. You are so good at creating believable characters and intriguing story lines, mixing great sex along with the good and the bad that happens in everyones life. I suppose I could complain about the extreme length, spelling and punctuation errors etc. like some others have, but that would be ridiculous. Please, please keep writing incredible stories!
Story in general.
This story grabbed me in the opening chapter. I'm glad I was able to read the whole
story. I don't think I would have liked it as much.
I rated this story with 5 stars. That isn't enough!
Thanks for giving us the story. I look forward to the next story.
Thanks.
Brill
Laughed and had tears reading this stroy.
Beyond words !
Going through this great story was an experience beyond words ... ! You laugh , you weep , you hurt ...as the protagonists do ....very rarely words have played so much with the mind , thought and feelings of the reader ..a pity we have no ratings beyond 5* !
Jesus, Mary,& Joseph!
I've read this twice now. I guess this makes me a sentimental fool, but in reading this I think of my wife. She was fifteen years older than I and discussed with me early in our relationship about the almost certainty that she would leave me first. She, of course, did in due cours. But only after many years. This stirs memories in me that I'd thouht I'd sucessfully put away. My daughter came to me soon after and we, also, had some good years together. But she had always been fragile and left me alone ultimately also. I love this story. But in the end, I have outlived my wife and daughter. My two great loves. You make me sad with resurrected memorise, but happy that I still have them. Ricky and Jenny's story is full of love, making love, frenzied fucking, heartache, tragedy, and wonder. A lot of sex is shoehorned into this story, but it is the story of their lives also. So, thank you for that. Most people that write a Novel or even an Autobiography completely leave out the importance of their romantic life and how important a good sex-life is to a good relationship. I'd like to read Diedra's account of their life together. As well, I'd be interested to read about Anna's life, but most of all I would like to read the story of Emily. She is one of the most amazing characters herein and so little is said of her beyond her hairaising escapes from death. I'm a little suprised that it was Diedra instead of Emily who took her place by Rick's side in the end. I thought Emily might put her ministry on hold and make a new life with Rick. She would have been good for him nearer the end of his life as she was 'the apple of his eye' at the beginning of her life. Well, thats all for me I guess.
What a story!!
You have a glorious way of telling it my friend, I'm in a nursing home due to an accident. I stayed up two days reading it, if you decide to write more I'm interested.
Good story, well excecuted and well written, ten stars.
Amazing Story
As a regular goer of this section, I have to say well done. This story, especially Bk 01, truly impacted and kept the reader at interest with what was transpiring. Every heart wrenching moment: the 4th of Juky, the potential break up, the childrens' birth, the wedding; all of it drew me and and I truly enjoyed every moment of it.
The one key item that threw me off, however, was the sudden lesbian interest between Gina and Jen. I was more attached to the two key persons of the story, and to see Rock and Jen finally be okay with such a growing relationship so fast seemed out of context. They were so adaptive and so in love that it was hard to focus on one relationship or the other, and my heart will always be set to the two that have grown over the 40+ pages. Otherwise, this story was spectacular! I will be overjoyed to show this one day to the own joy in my life, my son.
- Alicia
awesome...awesome...awesome!
Love the way you write! The longness of the story is it's strength. I didn't want it to end. Each sex scene was unique, which was good, for you know how you can like a story then hate that the sex is all the same! Lol
Absolutely the Best sorry I've had the pleasure of reading!
Definitely the benchmark for all stories on this and all other sites...loved it!!!
From 3 stars to 5
I read chapter 1 to this story left a comment accordingly and gave you 3 stars. I must say you got your act together with chapter 2 and WOW you got 5 stars this time round. BUT for me this story is far from finish for example. What happened to your characters Molly Paul Mitch and GIna etc etc. did Fiona and Jason take over his business??? What happened to Emily.. I must say your ending was a complete surprise , I thought of all people Emily, Daddy's little favourite would be the one who replaced Jen and not Deidre to look after all his needs, sexually or otherwise...they just seemed to have that special bond..Lastly if it was you're desired affect for tears to fall at the end you got a bucket full from me...once again well done....
memoeies
I could not put this down from beginning to end. Just as I finished this with tears my grand daughter who lives with us and as severe ADHD and attachment disorder and is a right hand full just bought me a birthday card with her own money without telling anyone. In my life right now that meant a lot to me. Keep up the good work
Fantastic
I found myself captivated from the beginning and although life would get in the way, I looked forward to sitting down and reading more of the story. I am normally not an emotional person (typical guy here), I actually found myself getting choked up during parts of the story, and laughing at other parts. In my opinion, any story that brings out the emotions of the reader is very well written. The only negative feedback I could offer would be in agreement with another comment I read. I would have liked to know what happened with Gina and Paul, Marsha and Sean, and I would have expected Emily to be the one to be with her dad more than Deidre. However, the way the story was written I have no real complaints. Outstanding story!
JEN & RICKY
Just finished ' Beyond the Borderline'. The passion for one another that you gave Jen and Rick is unmatched by any story I have ever read. Bravo... Bravo... Bravo. Thank you for this
Jennifer&Ricky
Absolutely Sterling! You have set a very high standard for this genre. Very high indeed. It's too bad we will not be able to read about Jennifer and Ricky again, I was left with a lonely, hollow feeling at the conclusion of Ricky's life. Well done!
Jennifer and Ricky
Best of genre! I was left with a hollow feeling at the conclusion of Ricky's life. Well done!
Like Reading War and Peace - Not
Massive work. Wanted to stop reading many times, but felt compelled to continue. Wanted to know where the next curve ball went. Loved, the loving the story, told. Sex was just part of it, as it is in life. Congratulations and thank you.
Heart wrenching and beautiful
I've been reading this on and off for the better part of two years. I know that just sounds lazy, but early on I felt it was going to be a roller coaster of ups and downs. And even then I suspected it would be a painfully finalized ending.
I've never felt so close to fictional characters before. There's a specific similarity to my life that drew me in and held me tight. I think many people that fall deep into this story will share that same connection.
To touch on the writing style, it is in a word sublime. It never felt forced, only natural and it flowed like a winding river, always something new around the bend.
This is an erotic story site, so ignoring a review of that would be silly. And to sum it up, it was single handdedly the most erotic thing I've ever read. I read some of the sex scenes out loud to my wife who has admitted it was the most loving and erotic scenes she's ever experienced.
To close it up, I must say thank you to those involved with the writing. This was a mountain of literature I would have paid good money to have in a hard back.
Thank you so much. This will echo in my mind as if I took the journey myself. Looking forward to another read through!
Absolutely incredible!
Simply put, without a doubt, BEST of genre.
Brilliant.
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