This wonderful story has everything. Find a print publisher. I'll buy one. AnHoa Rifleman
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Anonymous10/10/12
epic...
definitely some fap worthy story (both parts), however, looking back, I could have read this story without the need, was a truly EPIC story!
I echo the previous statement made, would buy if in book format.
The above being said, I really wanted to know a bit more about Emmy and Anna, later in life, not a detailed story, but how/what they where doing in life towards the end of rick's life, even more so about Emmy being the apple-in-the-eye as well as having the one instance and one character in the story where as a grown male, discounting the several other times where I was ready to cry but was able to hold back, outright had tears flowing...
but it's difficult to see the keys through my tears.
Thank you...
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Anonymous10/10/12
story line
i have read many stories but you have written so properly that I think that you could be the best I look forward to read same type of other story. I congratulate you for your effort of writing master peace. my heads off to you.
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Anonymous10/10/12
Great story, and for a first time author... holy fn crap. Whatever you do, please do not let this be your only contribution to this sight, it would be a loss to everyone who enjoys a good read.
I'm not sure if your two parter will unseat Threads: The Island, but it wouldnt surpise if it came close, and if it was one combined story, I'd go out on a limb and say it would replace Threads as number one in the hof. No knock against the author one bit at all, actually having these monster storys broken down into parts makes it easier to read I think.
Once again great story, cant wait to see your next offering.
My soul has been touched and I no longer want to take my own life. I am numb from the impact of this beautiful story. I was secretly married to my mother for 22 years when she passed into eternity in August. I struggle to make it through each day now as I feel so empty without her. I believe that you have experienced such love as your words express the deep love and passion that any mother and son are capable of. My dear Cille was unable to bear any more children after I was brought into this world, but we did enjoy being "Auntie and Uncle" to our close friend's precious families as they grew into adulthood. I never met my mom's sperm donor and don't regret that he left before I was born. My mom was my soul mate and my true love as far back as I can remember. I am still in tears hours after finishing reading this beautiful expression of true love...
well...around 25 chapters each book...i haven't begin reading yet! But it must be good!
cheers!
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Anonymous10/11/12
Your book!!!
I have read it all and I want to thank you for writing it. Tremendious story!!! I can't say enough about it
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Anonymous10/11/12
My Mother...
My mother died in 1999 at the age of 59. never having remarried after her 30 yr marriage to my father ended in divorce. i was the one who knew when she was hurting, always there with a hug. i rubbed her legs when she was in pain, but i was also the brunt of her anger towards my father. he was never there, but i was, she was still my mom and i loved her. i miss her so much. i wish i could go back and let her know how i feel. when i turned 18 i left, and never looked back. i was always lost without my mom, but i did not realize it until later how i felt. your story has opened up some old wounds for me, but i feel they have healed a little better for it. i cried almost the whole way through. when i was not laughing or trying to keep from touching myself. lol. thank you so much for your story. greg
Probably the very best series on mother son love.........
Enjoyed and loved it till the very end.....
Thanks to the author for sharing this beautiful story
Well, I anticipated another submission. Truly worth five stars but I wish I could have voted more. I'm at a loss for words so I'll just echo most of the sentiments of the preceding commentary. Thank you for a really, very endearing read.
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Anonymous10/11/12
Holy crap!
That was the best work of art that I've had to witness in my life. The way the expressions are shown in both the parts of this Mother-Son novel is unreal. I cannot believe that I've finally finished it. I didn't want it to end. I wanted to read more and kicked myself for not reading it more slower than I already was to really get into the vibe. Thank you so much, author. Please do write something similar. I would absolutely love to give it a read as well. Thank you!
Epic yarn, well told. Magnificent story idea and writing. Five stars plus. A small suggestion and request--how about a shorter story developing just two lovers' characters over a shorter time span--trying for equal depth with an economy of words? Actually, I am just trying to coax more writing out of you, and I really should not stay awake all night reading.
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Anonymous10/12/12
FABULOUS !!
I thought Part 1 was good, but this went far beyond good ! To be able to continue with a story with so many understories and make it understandable to the average reader, was just fantastic ! I would like to read more from such an author who keeps interest in the characters real for the reader.
WOW! Just wow! So many words for this series floating around in my head, but the one that seems to fit most is, brilliant. Everything about the tale truly is top notch. Literotica readers should consider themselves extremely fortunate to be able to read something of this quality for free. Well done CPB!
RWII
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Anonymous10/13/12
Hall of Fame shoo-in
Absolutely no doubt about. The passion, the emotion, the descriptions, all excellent. If you do a non-incest novel like you did this one, it'll have "Bestseller" written all over it!
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Anonymous10/13/12
Best I have read.
I have read many stories on this site. None of them can match this. This one will linger on the edge of my thoughts for a very long time. I truly hope to see more from this author soon. Great job...........
It is the most thought provoking and romantic love Story that I've had the honor of reading on this site. This is definitely worthy of Hall of Fame rating; Maybe even the top rated Story of all time, a job well done as you showed that unconditional love knows no bounds
The amount of emotion this drew out of me was incredible.. You have an amazing gift and I thank you for sharing it with me.
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10/14/12
Thank You
What a nice way to spend a Saturday evening - and a good part if my Sunday morning. I went back and re-read Book 1 before digging in to Book 2. I absolutely love your work.
There are a large number of talented writers who submit here and I don't take anything away from them by saying that you are in a class by yourself.
I thoroughly enjoyed every moment. Thank you for sharing your own talents with us.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Anonymous10/16/12
I have lived with my mother as lovers for the past 3 years. It has been incredible. Unfortunately, we suffered a miscarriage last year. Recently, my mother wants us to part, saying that she has come to her senses and we shouldn't be together. I'm heart-broken, as I have never loved a woman as much as my mother. There is no physical relationship between us now. I read this fantastic story and I cried. I asked my mother to read it and she cried for a very long time. She told me how much she loves me. I know our relationship is over. Thank you for this amazing story.
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Anonymous10/16/12
beautiful story
My wife/mom and i read it together and both were really touched.Best story i have ever read.
I've been around Lit since almost its inception in the mid nineties. Had to change my identity twice because I live among the most narrow mindedest hypocritic bigots...BUT THIS RANKS UP THERE AS THE BEST OR WITH THE BEST THAT HAS EVER BEEN CONTRIBUTED TO
Coming out of the closet once again.
Salute!
Slipery Rox (AKA Dlok) in SouthEast TN
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Anonymous10/17/12
Awesome
An awesome narration. What about Dee Dee's version to make the story complete.
Having read both book's thanks for the excilent story keep writing.
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Anonymous10/18/12
The Best
This will be the number one story. It was one that I had to bookmark to meke sure that my old computer didn't die and I would lose my place. Write more. What happened to Ann and Emily in the last stages. They were kind of lost outside the story. It was great, keep writing.
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Anonymous10/19/12
Great Story..
Whatever happened to little Emmy..Also wondering why you didn't get a few other couples together with Rick and Jenny for a couple of nice groupies....But Awesome story please continue....
Deirdre?! I never knew.
What a twist! I thought the little Em who'll eventually steal Ricky's heart away though (finger crossed).
The best story on Lit so far. Thank you so much, I enjoy reading this.
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Anonymous10/28/12
Write another similar story for us!
What a brilliant story! Look forward to reading another similar story from you with more emotions and romance. Cheers!
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Anonymous10/31/12
So lovely !
Just loved the whole story ! Both Bk1 and Bk2 , so well written with so much of sensitivity , love and passion !
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Anonymous10/31/12
loved both bks my heart melted and glowed with life all at the same time. i only hope to fined love like that
Loved it it made me feel every emotion of all the charicters
Oh, what a rollercoaster! I just couldn't help to read both books back to back, and I loved every minute of it. The characters feel so real (and what an amazing cast9, the story so exciting and emotional at times... Such a fantastic mother/son epic... You can't find better reads than this easily. I'm looking forward to read any future project of yours (particularly mom/son ones, my favourites), either in the 'Beyond the Borderline' universe or a new one. I'm curious about how Paul and Gina came to be and how their relationship evolved, so that would be a good read too. For being your first story, it is absolutely amazing what you ended up pulling off. Bravo! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.
This is the very best story I have ever read. Thank so much for writing it. You have an amazing talent. Your story was such a beautiful, emotional, and realistic story. I really hope that you'll be able to write another story just as long and just as wonderful as this one. Amazing Job. 5*****
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Anonymous11/02/12
gotta say i thought also that it would be emmy that would come to rick after jen died and i think that is my only dissapointment in the whole story.
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Anonymous11/06/12
Amazing!!!
Dude, this is the first mother and son story that makes me cry, the end where his mother welcomes him in the afterlife was so heart warming (and shatering). It was beautiful. I´ll say without any fear that this is the best incest story I had ever read.
It's really hard to believe that you are a first time author. Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful story with us!!!
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Anonymous11/11/12
Get it published.
Excellent story! The only thing I found a little far fetched was them not being discovered after having loud incestuous sex in near public places such as hotel rooms. If they had used their first names on those occasions where there was a real risk of being caught out instead of 'mum' & 'son' it would have been that much more believable. However you have a wonderful writing style and should consider getting published. 'Fifty Shades of Grey' was successful with a poor story line and a simplistic writing style. 'Beyond The Borderline' is far better! Congratulations! I can't wait for your next story.
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Anonymous11/14/12
Awesomeness!
I was very drawn in to both Beyond the Borderline stories. Like others I was surprised it was Dee Dee and not Emmy at the end but that's part of the being the reader and not the author. I did feel like Emmy kinda disappeared though. What happened to her after starting the church at the Inn? That is so miniscule though as the story is incredible! Props CPbaudelaire!
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Anonymous11/18/12
wow
Amazing. I've never read these type of stories before but this was great. Just reading of their whole lives from beginning to end was beautiful and the way it flowed......not to mention the end. I'm still crying. Great job.
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Anonymous12/01/12
Amazing Story, But....
Well paced and emotional. However (and I thought I'd never, ever say this), there seemed to be too much sex. After awhile, it was a chore to find the story line. Great story, though. Very thought provoking. I was kind of disappointed that Rick and Gina didn't get together.
An awesome story! If you do decide to publish, you might lose some of the sex...not the real sexy stuff, but just edit it a bit more. And, I agree with the person who said it should be properly published, it is a good read.
English
Yet Once Again.....Totally Awesome!!!!!
This wonderful story has everything. Find a print publisher. I'll buy one. AnHoa Rifleman
epic...
definitely some fap worthy story (both parts), however, looking back, I could have read this story without the need, was a truly EPIC story!
I echo the previous statement made, would buy if in book format.
The above being said, I really wanted to know a bit more about Emmy and Anna, later in life, not a detailed story, but how/what they where doing in life towards the end of rick's life, even more so about Emmy being the apple-in-the-eye as well as having the one instance and one character in the story where as a grown male, discounting the several other times where I was ready to cry but was able to hold back, outright had tears flowing...
Sorry...
but it's difficult to see the keys through my tears.
Thank you...
story line
i have read many stories but you have written so properly that I think that you could be the best I look forward to read same type of other story. I congratulate you for your effort of writing master peace. my heads off to you.
Great story, and for a first time author... holy fn crap. Whatever you do, please do not let this be your only contribution to this sight, it would be a loss to everyone who enjoys a good read.
I'm not sure if your two parter will unseat Threads: The Island, but it wouldnt surpise if it came close, and if it was one combined story, I'd go out on a limb and say it would replace Threads as number one in the hof. No knock against the author one bit at all, actually having these monster storys broken down into parts makes it easier to read I think.
Once again great story, cant wait to see your next offering.
Bless you...
My soul has been touched and I no longer want to take my own life. I am numb from the impact of this beautiful story. I was secretly married to my mother for 22 years when she passed into eternity in August. I struggle to make it through each day now as I feel so empty without her. I believe that you have experienced such love as your words express the deep love and passion that any mother and son are capable of. My dear Cille was unable to bear any more children after I was brought into this world, but we did enjoy being "Auntie and Uncle" to our close friend's precious families as they grew into adulthood. I never met my mom's sperm donor and don't regret that he left before I was born. My mom was my soul mate and my true love as far back as I can remember. I am still in tears hours after finishing reading this beautiful expression of true love...
Beautiful...
...just beautiful!
Love it...though i haven't read it yet!!
well...around 25 chapters each book...i haven't begin reading yet! But it must be good!
cheers!
Your book!!!
I have read it all and I want to thank you for writing it. Tremendious story!!! I can't say enough about it
My Mother...
My mother died in 1999 at the age of 59. never having remarried after her 30 yr marriage to my father ended in divorce. i was the one who knew when she was hurting, always there with a hug. i rubbed her legs when she was in pain, but i was also the brunt of her anger towards my father. he was never there, but i was, she was still my mom and i loved her. i miss her so much. i wish i could go back and let her know how i feel. when i turned 18 i left, and never looked back. i was always lost without my mom, but i did not realize it until later how i felt. your story has opened up some old wounds for me, but i feel they have healed a little better for it. i cried almost the whole way through. when i was not laughing or trying to keep from touching myself. lol. thank you so much for your story. greg
Touched my Heart
Probably the very best series on mother son love.........
Enjoyed and loved it till the very end.....
Thanks to the author for sharing this beautiful story
I really enjoyed the length of this story!
Well, I anticipated another submission. Truly worth five stars but I wish I could have voted more. I'm at a loss for words so I'll just echo most of the sentiments of the preceding commentary. Thank you for a really, very endearing read.
Holy crap!
That was the best work of art that I've had to witness in my life. The way the expressions are shown in both the parts of this Mother-Son novel is unreal. I cannot believe that I've finally finished it. I didn't want it to end. I wanted to read more and kicked myself for not reading it more slower than I already was to really get into the vibe. Thank you so much, author. Please do write something similar. I would absolutely love to give it a read as well. Thank you!
Incredible
That was incredible, I am soo crying now, my make up is ruined. Thank you for a fantastic, wonderful, complete story.
Brilliant!
This has to be one of the best stories ever posted on this site.... Than you
Bravo
Epic yarn, well told. Magnificent story idea and writing. Five stars plus. A small suggestion and request--how about a shorter story developing just two lovers' characters over a shorter time span--trying for equal depth with an economy of words? Actually, I am just trying to coax more writing out of you, and I really should not stay awake all night reading.
FABULOUS !!
I thought Part 1 was good, but this went far beyond good ! To be able to continue with a story with so many understories and make it understandable to the average reader, was just fantastic ! I would like to read more from such an author who keeps interest in the characters real for the reader.
Amazing!
WOW! Just wow! So many words for this series floating around in my head, but the one that seems to fit most is, brilliant. Everything about the tale truly is top notch. Literotica readers should consider themselves extremely fortunate to be able to read something of this quality for free. Well done CPB!
RWII
Hall of Fame shoo-in
Absolutely no doubt about. The passion, the emotion, the descriptions, all excellent. If you do a non-incest novel like you did this one, it'll have "Bestseller" written all over it!
Best I have read.
I have read many stories on this site. None of them can match this. This one will linger on the edge of my thoughts for a very long time. I truly hope to see more from this author soon. Great job...........
Loved it
Loved the chracters and the storyline. Thank you
Excellent story telling
You've got great focus to keep a sweeping story like this intergrated. Leo Tolstoy would have appreciated it, O'Henry... not so much.
WORDS CAN'T DESCRIBED....
It is the most thought provoking and romantic love Story that I've had the honor of reading on this site. This is definitely worthy of Hall of Fame rating; Maybe even the top rated Story of all time, a job well done as you showed that unconditional love knows no bounds
absolutely brilliant, couldn't leave it alone
Outstanding!!
Without a doubt the best I have read here!
Thank You
The amount of emotion this drew out of me was incredible.. You have an amazing gift and I thank you for sharing it with me.
Thank You
What a nice way to spend a Saturday evening - and a good part if my Sunday morning. I went back and re-read Book 1 before digging in to Book 2. I absolutely love your work.
There are a large number of talented writers who submit here and I don't take anything away from them by saying that you are in a class by yourself.
I thoroughly enjoyed every moment. Thank you for sharing your own talents with us.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
I have lived with my mother as lovers for the past 3 years. It has been incredible. Unfortunately, we suffered a miscarriage last year. Recently, my mother wants us to part, saying that she has come to her senses and we shouldn't be together. I'm heart-broken, as I have never loved a woman as much as my mother. There is no physical relationship between us now. I read this fantastic story and I cried. I asked my mother to read it and she cried for a very long time. She told me how much she loves me. I know our relationship is over. Thank you for this amazing story.
beautiful story
My wife/mom and i read it together and both were really touched.Best story i have ever read.
I've been around Lit since almost its inception in the mid nineties. Had to change my identity twice because I live among the most narrow mindedest hypocritic bigots...BUT THIS RANKS UP THERE AS THE BEST OR WITH THE BEST THAT HAS EVER BEEN CONTRIBUTED TO
Coming out of the closet once again.
Salute!
Slipery Rox (AKA Dlok) in SouthEast TN
Awesome
An awesome narration. What about Dee Dee's version to make the story complete.
THANK YOU
Having read both book's thanks for the excilent story keep writing.
The Best
This will be the number one story. It was one that I had to bookmark to meke sure that my old computer didn't die and I would lose my place. Write more. What happened to Ann and Emily in the last stages. They were kind of lost outside the story. It was great, keep writing.
Great Story..
Whatever happened to little Emmy..Also wondering why you didn't get a few other couples together with Rick and Jenny for a couple of nice groupies....But Awesome story please continue....
A very good story
Thank you.
Excellent!
Deirdre?! I never knew.
What a twist! I thought the little Em who'll eventually steal Ricky's heart away though (finger crossed).
The best story on Lit so far. Thank you so much, I enjoy reading this.
Write another similar story for us!
What a brilliant story! Look forward to reading another similar story from you with more emotions and romance. Cheers!
So lovely !
Just loved the whole story ! Both Bk1 and Bk2 , so well written with so much of sensitivity , love and passion !
loved both bks my heart melted and glowed with life all at the same time. i only hope to fined love like that
Loved it it made me feel every emotion of all the charicters
^__^
Oh, what a rollercoaster! I just couldn't help to read both books back to back, and I loved every minute of it. The characters feel so real (and what an amazing cast9, the story so exciting and emotional at times... Such a fantastic mother/son epic... You can't find better reads than this easily. I'm looking forward to read any future project of yours (particularly mom/son ones, my favourites), either in the 'Beyond the Borderline' universe or a new one. I'm curious about how Paul and Gina came to be and how their relationship evolved, so that would be a good read too. For being your first story, it is absolutely amazing what you ended up pulling off. Bravo! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.
Absalutely the very Best!!
This is the very best story I have ever read. Thank so much for writing it. You have an amazing talent. Your story was such a beautiful, emotional, and realistic story. I really hope that you'll be able to write another story just as long and just as wonderful as this one. Amazing Job. 5*****
gotta say i thought also that it would be emmy that would come to rick after jen died and i think that is my only dissapointment in the whole story.
Amazing!!!
Dude, this is the first mother and son story that makes me cry, the end where his mother welcomes him in the afterlife was so heart warming (and shatering). It was beautiful. I´ll say without any fear that this is the best incest story I had ever read.
It's really hard to believe that you are a first time author. Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful story with us!!!
Get it published.
Excellent story! The only thing I found a little far fetched was them not being discovered after having loud incestuous sex in near public places such as hotel rooms. If they had used their first names on those occasions where there was a real risk of being caught out instead of 'mum' & 'son' it would have been that much more believable. However you have a wonderful writing style and should consider getting published. 'Fifty Shades of Grey' was successful with a poor story line and a simplistic writing style. 'Beyond The Borderline' is far better! Congratulations! I can't wait for your next story.
Awesomeness!
I was very drawn in to both Beyond the Borderline stories. Like others I was surprised it was Dee Dee and not Emmy at the end but that's part of the being the reader and not the author. I did feel like Emmy kinda disappeared though. What happened to her after starting the church at the Inn? That is so miniscule though as the story is incredible! Props CPbaudelaire!
wow
Amazing. I've never read these type of stories before but this was great. Just reading of their whole lives from beginning to end was beautiful and the way it flowed......not to mention the end. I'm still crying. Great job.
Amazing Story, But....
Well paced and emotional. However (and I thought I'd never, ever say this), there seemed to be too much sex. After awhile, it was a chore to find the story line. Great story, though. Very thought provoking. I was kind of disappointed that Rick and Gina didn't get together.
This was beautiful. thank you.
Epic!
An awesome story! If you do decide to publish, you might lose some of the sex...not the real sexy stuff, but just edit it a bit more. And, I agree with the person who said it should be properly published, it is a good read.
I LOVED IT.
Awesome story.
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