Beyond the Borderline Bk. 02

Good taste.

most of incest stories are rough. Each incest strory has good plot and good begining but most of stories are dead when they have to show how and why son fuck his mom. that is a main point of mother and son incest story, many author killed their story in this stage (it is not easy condition to son fuck his mom normally in practical too.)and make senseless but in your its real good but i am not completed it. let me finish it first. i also intrested to post my some incest stories but i missing encourage.

Alain?!

You killed him off. Within a sentence. And then you just move on like Alain's death was nothing!! Fuck you, I cried. Asshole... you got me way too attached to a non-main character, and then POW half a paragraph later he's gone and never mentioned again, except for Emmy's story. So, 4/5 just out of spite for my fav. character's death. Alain, WHY?!?!?

Remarkable story!

A beautiful loving story developed brilliantly by a gifted author. So good, I couldn't stop reading and like many others, was often brought to tears.

I'm sorry Sir or Mam but it's difficult to believe that you are not already a published author.

Excellent work! Thank you and don't stop writing for heavens sake.

Incredibly good story

After bk1 I left a comment about how great I thought it was. Bk2 blew it out of the water. The two books together are terrific. I sit here now saying that no way was this the first writing of a new author. This was the work of an experienced and skilled craftsman. I'm a crusty old geezer but I bawled at the final scene where mom was leading her son into paradise. My wife of 39 years died 14 years ago in a traffic crash and I still miss her so much. I'm so looking forward to her touch when I finally get to see her again. You have brought her back to me in some way that I don't completely understand. My story and Rick's are very different, but love is very similar.

I spent 30 years in the U.S. Navy and I have been to many of the places you mention. Some of those places where I hadn't been have now seriously been added to my bucket list. I am definitely going to the Northwest of the US and Southwest of Canada within the next two years. Write another book soon.

I'm rare to read things but..

I'll be honest, I had peered into your story as a means of "personal entertainment" *ahem*..but as I kept reading..I could not stop. It touched me on quite a deep level. The ending for book2..if this was in real book format Id buy both books on a dime. Made me cry. Its sad, its adventerous, wisdom filled, its beautiful. Thanm you for making this.

captivating

this surely is not a first time writer the story captivated me from the start, such a disapointment that it had to end,very rarely do i get enthralled by a story and sucked into it but this did just that, well done . well written

Wonderful story. Brilliant write-up with sensual description on every episode

What can I say Bloody Good Read I hope the hell that you put pen to paper again because I will be looking and waiting for another heap of stories from you .
You may have had help with things but what a story, wish I could have given it a 98!
thanks very much best read in 2 or 3 years.

Just outstanding

This is an outstanding story by any standard. As a son who was abandoned by an intelligent and beautiful mother more concerned with her needs than her four children, I still search for stories of selfless devotion. A story such as yours indicates how far a loving a mother can go, even if these stories are fiction. (Are they?). Thanks for the insights so well expressed.

One Word

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

Forever in my thoughts.

I have read many stories here in Literotica. After reading these two books, I have no interest in what others will write. I have been married for many years and I never had love given to me as you have discribed in your writings. The sex was open and alive, but the story was better. Thanks for it all!

Fantastically wonderful

The absolute best story Ive read here. It turned me on incredibly, and then brought tears to my eyes. I cant wait to read more of your books.

Expand.

Loved it, and with so many characters that can be expanded on I hope you continue the series.

wow

brought me to tears at the end, i felt like i lived my life along with rick. thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Unbelievable story

Thank you for this story. I have read many other authors but you are the best.
I look forward to your next story.

its a pitty it cant be in book form for the world to read

I wish it were me in Ricks place... Feels so good

This is only the 2nd romance story I've read that really had an impact. You are truly talented and I wish you all the best in forward writings. This was not about incest, or sex, but about true love and you 'nailed' it solidly. Looking forward to future writings... now don't disappoint us too long.

Thank You

Thank you for an absolutely outstanding story. It touched my heart and teared me up several times. Thank You!!

Thanx for nice story

great story

jen should've fucked another guy

Ending was sudden disappointing turns

untitled

I'm not going to say much.

As other commenters here attest, you moved me.

I could mention some things that I think are off, but I'm not going to. As a former artist (not a writer) I see that you have what I believe it takes to figure out what does and does not work through writing itself. I see no value in intruding on your process.

Some questions, however: I may have missed this, because I did not read every single word, but I believe you never touched on the fact that Ricky was not only his children's father, but also their brother. Did I miss your treatment of this? Did you consider this aspect of Ricky's relationship with his children, and decide not to bring it up? Was this something you did not consider? This issue occurred to me earlier in the story, but it's omission seemed particularly apparent to me when Ricky was talking to Jason about Jason's feelings about his mom, and Ricky revealed to Jason his own double relationship to Jennifer. This again is not a critique, just something that came to mind. I'd be interested to know your thoughts on this.

just another reader

This was a very indearing story. Keep up the good work. Loved it.

I'd pay thousand bucks to read your next story

Now THIS is what a story must be. 25 page stories may seem long to somone but to me, this is the way stories must be - something that explains emotional side of relation and that is what feels real.

Thanks so very much for writing this. Can't wait to read your next story. Please please please write.

Adorable full of deep feelings of love.

I would love to read the next one. I don't like reading too much but I couldn't stop till I red the whole story till the end.
I await for the next one.

Through my tears...

...I am greatly moved and your work ranks right up with the very best love stories I've read in my 76 years. You were able to seamlessly move from mom's thoughts to son's thoughts. And to change each person's personality over the course of time.

I appreciate the slow beginning, the movements in spurts and stops, the real life actions and wonderment. When I realized what a quality piece of prose this was I slowed my reading down and savored the trip. Perfect ending. Choked me up.

Kudos to your editor. You are a great team. I can only guess at the time it took to put this prose in top condition.

I am sorting through the actors who will play the various roles.

The repeated release of endorpnins into my body has helped heal my recent heart surgery. Thanks for playing a part in my recovery.

Looking forward to another piece, take your time, your work is worth the wait.

A+

Excellent! Both romantic and erotic. Thank you for sharing this great piece with everyone.

For those that have not yet started, remember to go through it slowly. 53 pages go by REAL fast. Take your time.

The risk of a incest born child

There is a higher instance of mental and physical problems from incestuous or close relative relationships .
This is because of the similarity of any malfunctioning genes the body being inherited doubled because of the close relationship.

This is a very simple explanation of a quite intricate problem.

Well done!

This goes far beyond the usual erotic story and moves to erotic literature. It was well written, kept the tension, and included wonderful life lessons. It also delt with the fact that there are many of us who are not "victims" of incest but truly blessed by it.
Thanks for your work of pulling the relationship into the story rather than just the lust.

you fn bastard

i fn cried a lot because od Jen's and Ricky's death. I wish this story ends with : they lived happy in vancouver for the rest of their life. now im emotionally broken because of your writing ! ;( i want Jen and Rick to live forever in our minds, they were just perfect lovers and then its all gone ;( Love this story but love first part 50x more than this freaking depressing second :(((((( Bring Jen and Ricky back !!!! ;(((((

Great Story

Definitely, Magnum Opus. Keep it up.

Thank you

Thank you for sharing your story with the rest of us. It was a thing of beauty.

I laughed, I cried

In fact I am brushing away the tears as I write this...

I sincerely hope that you will see fit to honor us with more of your work.

Well Done!

This was very, very well done. I have read it more than once and enjoyed it every time. Please write more as soon as possible!

Quality writing!

Absolutely amazing story from start to finish. You really captured the emotions of Ricky and through his story we saw the day by day development of his love and his mother's love for him. Superb conversations kept the story line on track. Excellent first effort and I, along with loads of other people, hope you will grace us with another story (Dee Dee's story maybe?)
Thank you.

In awe!

I`m 78 and can`t ever remember such a moving story.Fiction it may be but such
tenderness and love must have been based in a real life event!Congratulations.

Loved it but...

I liked the story, but one thing kinda just ruined it for me. How every time the mom had someone interested in her, she would go to rick, but when she found out someone was interested in rick she didn't tell him till the last minute. That seems selfish to me, Kinda made me hate the mom.

Beautiful

A very well written,sensual story. I was drawn into the story and really enjoyed it. This would make a great movie.

PT# 2 is now also one of my favorites

I still have the same concerns about Mom / Son versus Real / Pet names being used in conversations, they had too much to lose - just as any other Incest couple would.

I thought that Emmy was going to be the one who stayed with Rick, so DD was a curveball. Unfortunately we don't know if they had kids! Nor do we know what happened to Anna, Emmy, or the rest of the extended family 8~(

I feel as though I've lost many good friends, because the story has ended. ... DKP

Brilliant!

This story had me in tears on numerous occasions. I've never read anything like it. Fabulous writing and had me completely absorbed from the moment i read it. Heart warming and breaking all in one.

Outstanding!

What a wonderful novel

I absolutely loved this story. I loved the fact that it was a novel with all the character development that entails. I like the way you write, I love the story itself and the "locations" ;)
I look forward to your next project and you have inspired me to try to do something comparable. I thank you for that.

I've already commented once, but I must say more. Your writing simply captured my complete attention so much that I wanted to do nothing but read. I know all stories cannot have happy endings and especially those based on real life, but the last few pages are so goddamn sad. So much love fought for for so many years in so many ways. Fear of discovery or failure. And then to have to read about their death. God, I almost mourned!

excellent

well written and enjoyable. got teary in a few places keep up the excellent work

Wow

There is no world to discribe this story ... Please do more story's I just can't get enough of your writhing :)

the best

simply the best story ive read in a long time great writing felt like i knew everybody in the story great ending cant wait for the daughters side of the story for me there was alot of loose ends like what happened to all their friends and what happened to dad at the end cancer broken heart what hope there will be more stories your one of the best so far keep it up great work keep it comming

This is so cute so my heart aches!

OMFG! My hands are shaking. It's a honour to me to read your story.

I'll be rereading it now and again.

Chears and Tears

Wow - What an awesome story - This is by far the best read I've had in a long time couldn't stop reading. Needed to know more about Jen and Ricky, Mom and Son, so precious their time together. You are a very talented writer - awesome visuals, I fealt as though I was standing in the room when the events were occurring. The emotions were heartfelt and strong , bring a tear to the eye at the loss, need to read more of your work keep writing - Please.

standing ovation

I've been reading from this site for five years and this story has made me tear up,stand up laughing, mad and attentive. This is beyond the best combined story I've read. Standing ovation through and through 7 out of 5 and a 13 out of 10.

Im just blown away.......

When I started this story I never thought I'd be so drawn in.Could not put it down till I finished. Big lump in throat??? was'nt expecting that. Great story!!!!!!

You have taken me beyond too

Wow! Wow! Wow! Absolute perfection!!! You have to get back on the horse and write again - pleeeeease.

The definitive mother-son romance?

Damn. I've not written a comment before, but...damn.
This is in a class by itself.
It's a real novel, with plot and characters you care about. It sucks you in and absolutely will not let you go. It demands to be read completely at once, so be sure to set aside some time to enjoy the journey. And did I mention it was hot? Great erotic tension, full of sizzling, forbidden sex and an incredible relationship between mother and son. Its place at the top of the HOF is well deserved. Definitely puts the "Lit" in Literotica, but never fails to deliver where it counts, either.
Bravo. Bravo. Bravo!