All Comments on 'Losing It'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Keep Writing

This story is bizarre and interesting. I really enjoyed your writing style and the future possibilities the characters imply.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
"I punch her swollen red face..."

and that kiddo is why you'll never fuck a real girl.

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I love (attempting) to write good fiction, but I also love sometimes just getting the filth and kink in my mind out onto paper, and hopefully out to the community. Please comment and enjoy all over the place. I love nothing more than an honest opinion.