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Really liked this!
It has nothing to do with my vote, but it was a little nice to know a bit about the communities. The feeling of small-town life came through very well. Been there, done that, not that we had a choice. I kept reading on, enjoying every line and wondering where the cliche would come in, and happily failed to find it. I ended up happy for the main character, and a little saddened that Jason didn't / couldn't show up afterward in a more corporeal way. Maybe next year, eh?
Please finish!!!!
What happens next? How could she fall pregnant with a dead man? Was it Scott? Please tell me I cannot sleep you have invaded my conscience it hurts. Be nice and do a epilogue or another chapter. I voted 5 stars it was excellent.
Oh, I liked this very much :)
Well written, engaging and set in my one of my most favourite countries in the world :)
I liked the story build up, having the opportunity to learn about the lead character and the history that brings her to this Halloween reunion with her lost love. Or was it? ;)
Great story! Best of luck in the competition!
Nicely symmetric
A good read, thanks! I liked the description of the country town, and the way that Eve broke away from the "stay here and have babies" syndrome. Well, until the end, anyway. Well done!
Excellent!
I do love a well written story, and I've found one! Your plot was great, and I too love good character development, and a good back story!
Keep Going...
There HAS to be more! Great story, by the way. However, "finishing" this story with a cliffhanger is just pure EVIL. ;-)
More!
you must post a chapter two!
Great Story!
Authentic, realistic, believably unbelievable! A perfect halloween story. Loved every sentence!
This should be...
The start of a series as it is to good to be a stand alone.
Surprised Me
I really like this story. You set the scene w/the small town atmosphere and anyone who has ever lived in a small town knows that time often stands still. And to attend a school reunion in that small town you left, that could be torture even if you left on excellent terms. And who can forget their first love? This love ended so tragically. You somehow managed to take all of this negative, stir in alittle Halloween and pouf we have a very surprisingly happy ending. I'd say job well done but I think my previous comment already says that!! Can't wait to see what you do next....hint hint
Oh, you WITCH!
Curses on you! You can't leave it hanging like that, I hardly thing that's fair!
Wonderful story, SLG, authentic, romantic and erotic all wrapped up in one. Now hurry up and write the sequel :)
Great Story
Excellent story line, believable and it flows very well. Extremely well written.
Thank you.
Lovely!
I really enjoyed this haunting tale and would love to know more. Eve was beautifully rounded and she'll stay with me. Nice!
THE SMELLS TRIGGER MEMORIES of the past
some good, some great, others not so.....but it all happened and we are here and now. TK U MLJ LV NV
#2 YOUR WRITING REMINDS ONE OF VONNEGUT
and his Slaughter House Five. and who can know what could happen on Hallows Eve. TK U MLJ LV NV
Nice Job!!
Way to take my casual idea and run with it SLG. Awesome story, and thanks for the fabulous shout-out.
Wanna get drunk again?
lol
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