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Anonymousover 11 years agoPositively excellent!
You nailed that one, a very nice story with lots of promise. Can stand alone or with more, but I think the effect is as strong letting it stand and move along to your next opus!
Erotonautover 11 years agoDecent debut, but...
(a) Lose the "slut" stuff: it's getting really tired.
(b) He needs to know not to leave her hanging next time.
devilishdaisy86over 11 years agoMore!
Please continue this story! I really want to read more! You're a very talented writer :)
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