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by Anonymous

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by tazz31710/11/12

UNTIL ONE FINDS THE TRUE SOUL MATE

only bad habits have to suffice, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by HarryHill10/12/12

The careful reader,

will never see that this offering is a personal comment about a love affair (with poetry)
and I have a suspicion that D101's 'A Fool's Deserts' held much of the same

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by butters10/12/12

harry - this has something

something elegantly sorrowful, and like you're plugged into shakespearean in its message - a message that will reach out to touch anyone who writes and so has endurance over time.

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by twelveoone10/13/12

what

chip said 5ed
one small nit, Sweet and Heart can be capped, as pet names? Eyes?

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