Chronicles of the Black Swords

WOW

That was awesome would like more. Just awesome. very well written

very good

would love to see more of this work. Best in a while.

Fierce dark fantasy

Love this first chapter and hope there are many more in this saga. The love between man and dwarven maid is an interesting touch and there will hopefully be more on the subject. The history of the black swords would be good to hear about. Thank you for this story and its' bearded maiden five stars

nice story

Nice story about the swords,makes me remember the nazguls from lotr. Although I hope there's other women involved in the later chapters...not so into the dwarven thing. Still,its really good all in all

Could use an editor

Drug isn't the past tense of drag, you turned stare into star, starring is what movie stars do, a few other mistakes. But overall, a good effort.

Unusual story

I definitely liked it.

Drug isn't the past tense of drag,

That one is a matter of my accent. Where I'm from it is used that way. Believe me it can get a lot worse. I grew up using words like Yohnto...chuur...yhhap..and cheehr to sound them out the way that they sound when spoken. They would be ( you want to) (sure) (Yep) and (right here) if wrote out the right way.

It is almost as much a different sounding language as the way British English sounds to an American ear.

Yet for me it's the way everyone talks. I don't hear my accent. I also don't see it when I write.

Thanks for the comments

M.S.Tarot

Hopes for more

To hell with the blithering fill-in-the-blanks whining about proper spelling and syntax; the point of language is to get the message across, which you have done admirably. I want to read more of this!

Cannot wait for next part

working on it

This is part of a very old idea I had. I have notes going back about twenty years for story idea. Different swords, different heroes or...villeins in some cases. Should have about three more up before the end of the year. Glad your enjoying them.

Extraordinary ...

... extraordinary ....

Wow!

Google Michael Moorcock.

Moorcock wrote about the Chronicles of the Black Sword back in the sixties. Try reading Stormbringer and the other Elric stories - no sex in them but much better stories than this.

Coarse, but powerful

I guess this must be some of the dark things that get dredged up from time to time when someone scours their imagination. I like it. Very powerful, and as always. You display emotion well. Interesting choice to have a dwarf woman. I like it, new and novel.

Sincerely, Payenbrant

Very good story but...

It desperately needs a good proof-reader and editor.