All Comments on 'The Undressing Room'

by Amorepassione

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MistressCarrieMistressCarrieover 11 years ago
Incomplete

Seems like you rushed it a bit. Nice story line, good idea just too rushed at the end and seems too much like a sequel builder. Maybe it should have been a preface rather than a story submission. Sorry, just being honest.

newjaynenewjayneover 11 years ago
And just to be different...

More, please! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More!

Make another one, please!

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