All Comments on 'The Mind Flip'

by Lesprit_Descalier

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good story

Good story I have a similar fantasy only thing I would suggest is proof read, your 'IT' being in capitals kept disrupting the flow of the story

griffin57griffin57over 11 years ago
great twist

Great story and new kink. Good idea!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
need more of this!!!!!

as you wrote,

But, would it work again?

I certainly hope so!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

eagle122999eagle122999over 11 years ago
Awesome

Great story. Hope to hear more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more

Please write some more

FlaresandslippersFlaresandslippers5 months ago

A hardon with the kide wtf

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