I got tired of reading other stories on this site so I looked for one written by an excellent author who contributes to this site. I reread this one. I enjoyed it a lot yet again and thank you for taking the effort to share this with us. I naturally gave it a 5 and looking at the results I want to say that it well deserves the hall of fame score that it got. Congratulations!
some ways disappointed that Lori is still in the story, but it isn't my story. I was pleased with the way he handled Lori's letter. "Okay, I'll file for divorce." I would hope that I could have done that. Now what with Lori?
“Um, I'm the father." – Oh, come on! Even as a slip of the tongue, EVERYONE knows that when a man in a pregnancy situation says, “I’m THE father,” that he is saying that he is the baby’s father.
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Anonymous05/01/16
Good Read
You do good stories.
I keep getting very angry at the authorities and media ignoring peoples democratic rights. Why has he not instructed his lawyer to instigate legal action against every person and government official who embarked on a campaign of victimisation?
Nit-Pick "I've already made a note of your call, so the clock is now ticking on the seventy-two hours" - I'm far from an expert on police procedures, but I would think if a person has already been missing for 24 hours when the police are contacted, that only an additional 48 hours should have to go by to meet the 72 hour requirement, not 72 hours from the initial report to the police!
I think others have said it, but he should just slam the door in her face!
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Anonymous08/29/16
Lost me at...
... "Oh daddy! I want to have the baby!" Fucking pro-lifer authors.
by
Anonymous09/05/16
After page 1
We ALL knew that Lori ran away with her daughter's boyfriend! A woman that thinks she is still a teenager? A woman that is in constant competition with her own daughter? Of course she would seduce her daughter's boyfriend! Maybe she ran because she got pregnant too???
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Anonymous10/01/16
8/19/16....
Fucking pro-baby killing cunt.
Your own mother made a huge mistake, by letting you live, instead of digging you out one piece at a time.
What does every single pro-death baby killer have in common?
...we seem to have some anger issues. I've always marvelled at "pro-life" zealots and their fanatical rage at anyone who doesn't march in lockstep. Even more inexplicable is the threat (and unfortunately the carrying out) of physical violence, even death, for those who believe and act otherwise. Sad, not to mention sociopathic.
It's why the decision should be private and made in a medically uncomprimised environment where facts and consequences can be discussed and understood. Not the government deciding, and certainly not the church, nor a group of strangers (yeah, I mean you.) Feel free to disagree. But ask yourself this -- where are the "pro-life" pre natal centers, the post natal support groups, day care/pre schools, etc. Hmmm.
It appears you're position is not so much pro-life but more akin to a fetus fetish and/or a birth fixation. Because if you were truly pro-life you'd understand that life extends far beyond its birth. And yet once that's occurred...everything changes, that precious child is now a burden on taxpayers, a juvenile delinquent in the making, it's a good thing we have enough jails...blah, blah, blah, blah.
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Anonymous02/19/17
Why not sue the newspapers?
The suits would make front page headlines. Who knows if he could collect damages but it might make him feel better. A jury of his peers might award lots of money. And with Lori here, his next call should be the Police. She's guilty of wasting the taxpayers money and might have to pay restitution and serve jail time. At least her coming back would be front page news and more redemption for him. This chapter left a lot of questions.
English
Great Story, Francis
I got tired of reading other stories on this site so I looked for one written by an excellent author who contributes to this site. I reread this one. I enjoyed it a lot yet again and thank you for taking the effort to share this with us. I naturally gave it a 5 and looking at the results I want to say that it well deserves the hall of fame score that it got. Congratulations!
Now
shoot the bitch.
semenfncpl3, world's worst internet hard man
gorged on semen smoked fresh from a cock is no way to be intimidating semenfncpl3, wipe the jizzy drool from your lips first at least, jeez
Brandon
10 to 1 Lori ran off with Brandon.
KNOCK KNOCK......WHOS THERE
the reaped returns to the sty, TK U MLJ LV NV
In
some ways disappointed that Lori is still in the story, but it isn't my story. I was pleased with the way he handled Lori's letter. "Okay, I'll file for divorce." I would hope that I could have done that. Now what with Lori?
It was obvious
on the first page that Lori was fucking her daughter's boyfriend. Obvious that they ran away together.
@krosis666
I was going to say the same thing, that Brandon was Lori's lover.
They both disappeared at the same time.
BYE BYE TO MOMMY
guess she's gone a-slumming. TK U MLJ LV NV
no problem
Just slam the door.
I agree with the door slamming comment.
Don't let her see the kid, don't let her into the house. It can come to no good.
wow, you're good!
When you get to the end, hang a sharp right, or maybe a 180? Anyway, I just gotta find out what happened next.
DHL
Not Sure I Buy This One!
“Um, I'm the father." – Oh, come on! Even as a slip of the tongue, EVERYONE knows that when a man in a pregnancy situation says, “I’m THE father,” that he is saying that he is the baby’s father.
Good Read
You do good stories.
I keep getting very angry at the authorities and media ignoring peoples democratic rights. Why has he not instructed his lawyer to instigate legal action against every person and government official who embarked on a campaign of victimisation?
Re-Reading
Nit-Pick "I've already made a note of your call, so the clock is now ticking on the seventy-two hours" - I'm far from an expert on police procedures, but I would think if a person has already been missing for 24 hours when the police are contacted, that only an additional 48 hours should have to go by to meet the 72 hour requirement, not 72 hours from the initial report to the police!
I think others have said it, but he should just slam the door in her face!
Lost me at...
... "Oh daddy! I want to have the baby!" Fucking pro-lifer authors.
After page 1
We ALL knew that Lori ran away with her daughter's boyfriend! A woman that thinks she is still a teenager? A woman that is in constant competition with her own daughter? Of course she would seduce her daughter's boyfriend! Maybe she ran because she got pregnant too???
8/19/16....
Fucking pro-baby killing cunt.
Your own mother made a huge mistake, by letting you live, instead of digging you out one piece at a time.
What does every single pro-death baby killer have in common?
They weren't killed before being born.
My
...we seem to have some anger issues. I've always marvelled at "pro-life" zealots and their fanatical rage at anyone who doesn't march in lockstep. Even more inexplicable is the threat (and unfortunately the carrying out) of physical violence, even death, for those who believe and act otherwise. Sad, not to mention sociopathic.
It's why the decision should be private and made in a medically uncomprimised environment where facts and consequences can be discussed and understood. Not the government deciding, and certainly not the church, nor a group of strangers (yeah, I mean you.) Feel free to disagree. But ask yourself this -- where are the "pro-life" pre natal centers, the post natal support groups, day care/pre schools, etc. Hmmm.
It appears you're position is not so much pro-life but more akin to a fetus fetish and/or a birth fixation. Because if you were truly pro-life you'd understand that life extends far beyond its birth. And yet once that's occurred...everything changes, that precious child is now a burden on taxpayers, a juvenile delinquent in the making, it's a good thing we have enough jails...blah, blah, blah, blah.
Why not sue the newspapers?
The suits would make front page headlines. Who knows if he could collect damages but it might make him feel better. A jury of his peers might award lots of money. And with Lori here, his next call should be the Police. She's guilty of wasting the taxpayers money and might have to pay restitution and serve jail time. At least her coming back would be front page news and more redemption for him. This chapter left a lot of questions.
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