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It felt like a lot of heart went into this.
I loved it.
One of the more realistic stories out there
Felt that Jen's reaction was very realistic, great story so far!
Very enjoyable
Please continue the story! It would be good to get it edited though.
That was a thoroughly enjoyable story!
It felt as though the feelings and emotions wer so real. I do hope there's going to a follow-up to this one.
nice story
Well written, believable, nice mix of conversations. the ending was a bit of a let down but understandable - may want to revise to reflect feelings more or to set the stage stronger for the next chapter.
Maybe A Spanking
I know that some women who like having their nipples pinched hard also like being spanked, so maybe a spanking in the next chapter.
Lovely
Lovely story. Seems so real, so human, so well told.
Please write more, I love your stories and how they make me feel.
Donox.
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