All Comments on 'A Made Woman Ch. 01'

was the store fucking empty since noone else heard or saw them in the middle of the aisle fucking themselves stupid? if not then she has no room to call the other girl anything since she just fucked a guy in the middle of a kids toy store.

I know that seems a little far fetched. That is honestly what I dreamt and I tried to be true to it. I think the passion of the moment overwhelmed them both and they didn't care. I was playing on fantasy. Do I think I could get away with something like that? No way! I wouldn't even try. But it's nice to think about. And it wasn't a toy store, just a general store like a dollar store or something. Anywho, other people enjoyed it. Don't think too hard about it :P It's fiction. You'll hurt your head.

Please ignore some of the anonymous comments, some people are purposely leaving stupid comments. Anyway, great beginning, I hope you continue on with it.

I enjoyed part one of your story. I hope part two will arrive shortly.

can't wait for the next part of the story

More please!

moooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

This needs to continue, frankly I'D do Dio(and the actor he represents!) also.

This was so great, I hope you can continue it :)