All Comments on 'The Book Ch. 02'

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DarkSolarDarkSolarover 11 years ago
Interesting side play with demon

I like the reaction of the she-demon/Succubi, when our hero say or does something she least expect. This could be a beginning of romantic relationship between the two. LOL. His mother may have something to say about that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thank you

I love the story so far, please keep going.

I would definitely love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please Make More

Hey,

Please make more :) this is a really good series, I check it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Would love to see another installment

The interplay of the "world views" is fun!

removed110513removed110513over 11 years ago
Awesome Series, please continue

Tis is an awesome series, I am very excited for a third chapter, if there is to be one.if there isn't, I beg that you make one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please

Would really love to see more of this series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Awesome story. Really looking forward to the next part

illjoyilljoyalmost 11 years ago
more plox

Good read hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
loved it

Please add more, way to many people start on this site with stories and never finish. Don't be one of them please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OK so where is it???

Does he finally get his mom?

Can you please let us have the next chapter?

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
hmmm.....

We gonna havta wait another 6 months for another chapter to be posted?

Its just like your other posted stories & probably 2 years before we get the complete story here.

Sad. But at least you're consistent. The delays that is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please more

I really like this story and would love another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice

So when is the new chapter?

ZeoUnitZeoUnitalmost 9 years ago
Interesting

I like the story so far but sadly if the date of last update suggests anything is that there will not be any more updates of this story. Shame really... Looks like it could have been good one.

happywriter007happywriter007over 7 years ago
Don't leave me hanging!

I am looking forward to part 3, you really got my mind going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
MORE PLEASE!

Please write more. My hope is that you don't just stop this story and abandoned it. I've read allot of good stories but was disappointed that they were unfinished. This story is quite a good story because there's not many of this type and those that are suck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I hope you make more

I enjoyed it very much

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