I appreciate this author's talent, but less so for these stingy disbursements of plot & story.
As a reader, I had just started to flow with the story's rhythm then boom it's over
. The effect whether intended or not is that the author is pulling my chain. I suppose that's always true but blatantly so in this instance.
Three pages should be the minimum standard in terms of non-flash stories. This was a lovely little snippet but all too brief.
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I appreciate this author's talent, but less so for these stingy disbursements of plot & story.
As a reader, I had just started to flow with the story's rhythm then boom it's over
. The effect whether intended or not is that the author is pulling my chain. I suppose that's always true but blatantly so in this instance.
Three pages should be the minimum standard in terms of non-flash stories. This was a lovely little snippet but all too brief.
Chapter 14
Great new chapter! I like how you have created a new internal conflict with Kim's desire for both her lovers.
I am eager to read the next chapter in Kim's tale.
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