My Trick or Your Treat

Nicely done...

Loved it! More please...

Didn't see that coming..

Wow! I didn't expect her to be a transgender. You certainly had me fooled. Because how well you laid out the story and the twist in the ending, I will look for more of your work.

DS

WTF

Written like a 5 year old.

Love this

I thought I knew how this would go but it was so different! I was shocked! Love it! Trick for sure.

Wow...

this author has issues... deep, psychological issues.

Good Read****

Trick Or Treat only this time the treat gets tricked. Thanks for a different read.

YOU MOTHERFUCKER!

Now I feel *blech* for getting wood...

Haha, great story.

Blerg

Not a fan of 1st person to begin with, tepid writing, revenge twist ending is blase at best, about as erotic as a 2x4. This isn't bashing the ending, the story and writing is just bad.

Interesting

Different kind of story. You warned us of the twist ending I guess no one listened. I liked the writing, proper grammar for once. Also, got me wet. Good job.

Dead

You think she can't be found? This whole thing just didn't work. Too unbelievable

And that's the link

She called your wife. Find the phone records and you find her. Revenge is a dish best served cold.