Wonderful characterisations, you really presented two believable flawed characters. I really liked the build up and where it was going, but the ending felt kind of incomplete or rushed? Normally if it ends in a rush there's an unexpected twist, which didn't really seem to be present. In all probability it's just my expectations leading me astray with it being filed under "Erotic Horror".
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